HOW'S MY DRIVING?

[paradisamods]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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[lord-wizard.livejournal.com]

Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://lord-wizard.livejournal.com/1862.html)
Canon Point: Between book 3 and 4
Time in Paradisa 8 months

I really can't think of anything specific for Felix, but I welcome any insight. Is there any crits on me as a player as far as tagging speed or habits? Player communication? Anything?

[daddyhost.livejournal.com]

I just have much love for how open and awesome you are to plot with, and I would love more CR with Felix.

[psych0p0mps]

Name: Aradia Megido - ar0se
Fandom: Homestuck
Loss: Resistance to mind control
Canon Point: the present, whenever that is.
Notes: I know I have been a little bit on the inactive side lately :( I fell behind at some point and then Steam had a big sale and stuff. I am trying to get caught up but will probably just drop some of the older threads.
Specific Crit Requests: None in particular???

[silentbutwinged.livejournal.com]

I super love your Aradia. When I was first reading Homestuck I didn't care for her character way or another but ever since seeing you play her I've taken a real liking to her! She's great and I can't wait until Steam stops eating your life. :) (Though I think it has a habit of doing that to everyone at some point in time.)

[rhymebell.livejournal.com]

The World Ends With You: Raimu "Rhyme" Bito - rhymebell
Loss: Memories of the Reaper's Game and memories of her brother
Canon Point: After game
Notes: She just got off a Noise loss, and she'll be getting kidnapped sometime during the Ritful plot!
Specific Crit Requests: Just crit me on anything. Please tell me if I suck.

Durarara!!: Sonohara Anri - chatroomnurse
Loss: Ability to order 'children'/infect people with Saika
Canon Point: Episode 24
Notes: I feel odd throwing Anri into threads, mostly because she's a bit on the anti-social side and she didn't exactly make lots of friends- people in canon that she was friends with always talked to her first, except in the case of Mikado, but he was a class representative.
Specific Crit Requests: I think I might be making her too talkative about Saika and the like. Any thoughts?

[hyuuga]

First off, I do love your Rhyme. She acts like any younger sibling who's had to take on the responsibility of taking care of things. You're doing it right with her from what I remember of TWEWY, too.

As for Anri... I don't remember Durarara!! too well, but I do remember that she can seem rather parasitic/apathetic in her friendships and in general--in that she does things if it has a benefit for her which can be hard to show, but can be done through action. So my advice is to try and toss her into action threads more than journal threads unless she has met them already?

[arrowonthewind.livejournal.com]

➹Alleria. She's done being batshit crazy for the most part, so she is being all sociable now! I'm just a little concerned she is too nice. Is she still bitchy enough, Para?

☠Brock. Nothing specific!

✟Hellboy. HB's voice comes the easiest to me. Most of what he says is meant to be very deadpan humor -- is it coming across that way, or does he just seem to be boring?

✎Odell. Non-character-specific crit is welcomed as well!

[sodoomed.livejournal.com]

I haven't read Hellboy, but I've always gotten the 'total deadpan' vibe from him. :) Especially with Zim.

[fishy-go-byebye.livejournal.com]

Sandman: Delirium - fishy_go_byebye
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://fishy-go-byebye.livejournal.com/8691.html)
Loss: Her ability to directly effect people's minds - or, she can't go around just randomly putting the crazy in people.
Canon Point: End of The Wake, which is the last book in the original Sandman arc.
Notes: Not really, have at it, I can usually take it :)
Specific Crit Requests: Sometimes her voice feels iffy, and I always appreciate input on that.

[justcharles.livejournal.com]

I've always been fond of your take on Delirium. I may not know the canon well, but her balance of crazy-yet-understandable makes her fun to play off of =3

[sodoomed.livejournal.com]

Invader Zim
Invader Zim | sodoomed | HMD (http://sodoomed.livejournal.com/3414.html)
Loss: Any straight-up water (regardless of amount of pollution) touched externally will cause him to burn horribly.
Canon Point: Vindicated! When he's on his way to get the superweapons from the fake aliens!Dib and Dwicky.


Yuki Nagato
The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya | bogusmagic | HMD (http://bogusmagic.livejournal.com/1362.html)
Loss: Mikuru and Itsuki. She knows a time traveler and an esper are involved in Haruhi shenanigans and part of the SOS Brigade, but that's all.
Canon Point: Post-Disappearance.

Notes: My activity has been pretty shit all summer. This isn't going to change until September rolls around, unfortunately. :(

[chatroomnurse.livejournal.com]

I really, really like your Zim! From what I remember about the show, he seems very close to canon and I like the CR he has with Rhyme! Even if it's just a bit.

[likethetragedy.livejournal.com]

Daredevil (Marvel): Elektra Natchios - [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com]
Loss: Ability to give life
Canon Point: post-Elektra

Trinity Blood: Esther Blanchett - [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com]
Loss: Her rosary
Canon Point: Albion Arc; specifically when she's rescuing Abel from Vanessa

I don't know what to really ask. I think I'm okay? I'm fully open to suggestions.

[daddyhost.livejournal.com]

As ever, I absolutely adore your characters. Both are very true to canon and, even with someone like Elektra who isn't the most talkative person, I can hear both personalities very clearly.

ARDEN

[dancinpenguins]

Lois Lane | loisfuckinglane

Series | Smallville
Canon Point | 10x11
Loss | Memories of Chloe Sullivan (her cousin)
HMD Post | Here, screened + anon available Use for ANY character :3
Time in Paradisa | 10 months
Wiki Page | Here
Character Relations Chart | Very very in need of updating, but here

Logan/Wolverine | slicesanddices

Canon | X-Men films
Canon Point | Directly after Phoenix throws him into a wall in X3
Loss | Memories of Rogue
Time in Paradisa | 5 months
Wiki Page | Here
Character Relations Chart | Here

The Almighty Tallest Purple | superiorheight

Canon | Invader ZIM
Canon Point | Post-series
Loss | Telling lies causes lasers to hit him in the eye
Time in Paradisa | 1 month

Arden | dancinpenguins

Loss | Her mind
Time in Paradisa | About 8 months
Wiki Page | Here
Contact | Plurk > ardendactyl AIM > thegreatmuldini
Concerns | Am I approachable as a mun? Do you feel like I'm open to plot with, etc.? Do I follow through well or leave you hanging? How's my activity? Do I have a good variety of characters/plots/posts/CR/etc.? Do you have concerns about my behavior OOC?

Re: ARDEN

[foolreversed]

This is for you and Almighty Tallest Red's player but I've been meaning to say for a while now that when I read your guys threads (especially with Zim WHO IS ALSO FANFUCKINGTASTIC) that their dialogue always feels to me like I'm watching the show again... in text format or something LOL. All of you got their voices down really well, it's hilarious!

That's all I've really got to say, lmao I am failing at this crit thing (crit what crit pfft)

[luckyvalentine.livejournal.com]

Billy (Dr. Horrible) | Dr. Horrible's Sing-Along Blog - need_to_rule_it
Private HMD: (optional) (http://need-to-rule-it.livejournal.com/1342.html)
Loss: The ability to design or build weaponry
Canon Point: Post-canon
Stuff: Just general stuff! Have no real special questions this time. He's my oldest, so I always wonder if he's still fun and Billy enough. Will be part of the villain plot, so gearing him up for that will be interesting.

Faye Valentine | Cowboy Bebop - luckyvalentine
Private HMD: (optional) (http://luckyvalentine.livejournal.com/1496.html)
Loss: Re-loss of her memories
Canon Point: Post-canon
Stuff: Again no real specific questions for her, I think. She's been especially obnoxious to people lately (sorry therapy loss folks) so want to make sure players aren't getting too sick of her trolling?

Legato Bluesummers | Trigun - endthem
Private HMD: (optional) (http://endthem.livejournal.com/327.html)
Loss: Most memories of Knives
Canon Point: End of episode 24
Stuff: Always desperate for feedback on Legato! I want him to be a fun villain for other people to play off of, and want to make sure his tricky voice is still strong, so... please voice any thoughts you have.

Prince Zuko | Avatar: The Last Airbender - honorinflames
Private HMD: ...hmm. really need to get on that.
Loss: Memories of Mai
Canon Point: Book 2, Early in episode 18
Stuff: I guess I can't keep calling him the baby of the family, huh? Mostly just curious to know if he feels like he's as strong of a character and involved in enough for how long he's been here? Feedback on voice is always super welcome too.

Open for concrit on myself as well! I've been making a conscious effort to have better habits as a player, but don't know if I've really gotten better about things yet.

[anonmice.livejournal.com]

I sincerely hope you don't take this the wrong way... but I am not fond of how godmoddy you describe and play Legato out to be. For one, I'd like to know what medium he is pulled from: manga or anime? If he's predominately anime, I can understand you incorporating his manga background since the anime never touches upon it but you pick at his powers and make him out to be this untouchable godmode when I'll be curt: Legato is not the godmode telepath you've been playing him as in Paradisa. In Trigun canon, the world they inhabit has small populations for "cities". They may as well not be cities but towns or villages. When Legato takes control of all the townspeople in the anime, the population is nowhere near the amount you wanted him to control for this upcoming Riful plot. The towns in the anime are ~1000 at most and even then, Vash was capable of hitting him with his gun at one point.

You have emphasized you "don't know" what Legato's "limits" are and by doing so, you didn't bother to give him any and assume he is more powerful than a majority of characters in Paradisa. That is why I don't bother dealing with him in game and the fact you are intimidating and vexing to deal with when it comes to him OOC-ly. You stated you would consent to characters capturing him, followed by characters and muns having to jump through hoops to figure out how to take down a character who realistically would not last against the likes of say, Clark Kent or the Doctors. You gave off a vibe of not wanting Legato to be dealt with long term with your insistence that he is "godmode" and "sneaky" so he would avoid the town and residents. I have heard you have avoided posting to the OOC comm for a long time about the townspeople being kidnapped by him because Legato was "sneaky" about it. In doing so? You godmodded dozens of characters off the bat, many of whom patrol the city. And now those who play hero types are being blamed for something they weren't aware of in the first place. It is not accomodating in the least and I do hope once this plot is done with you will be mindful on how you play your villains, as you've done the same with Billy in the past over the nightmares event. You agreed to characters determining the culprit and when Billy became a prime suspect you bailed on those involved and they had to force their characters to turn the other cheek.

Another one of my issues is how you deal with Legato's nihilist beliefs and behavior in game. In the anime, he simply wants to die, it's why he forces Vash to kill him. In Paradisa, every altercation he is faced with he is defensive and quick to retreat. Please explain this?

[notmyfaultwall.livejournal.com]

Red vs. Blue: Michael J. Caboose - notmyfaultwall
Loss: His super strength
Canon Point: Revelation: Chapter 20
Notes: I know he’s really, really new, but anything you can throw my way’s appreciated!
Specific Crit Requests: Caboose’s speech patterns sound really strange. There are random pauses, and sometimes there are full stops in the middle of his sentences. Am I doing a good job of portraying that?

Also, do you prefer. The full stops. Or do you like, the short, pauses, instead? Or. Does it work best. As, a joint thing?

Alsosometimeshespeedsuphisspeech. Is that annoying? Should I just put [said very quickly] instead?

[fishy-go-byebye.livejournal.com]

I think I like the combo of stops and pauses, and... [said very quickly] is easier to read, but I always kinda liked deciphering long strung together sentences...

[thedicearecast.livejournal.com]

Character: Amelia - thedicearecast
Fandom: Trigun
Link to HMD: HMD Post (http://thedicearecast.livejournal.com/2338.html)
Loss: Memory of choosing either to kill Gasback or spare his life.
Canon Point: Post-movie
Notes: I definitely need to get Amelia out more. But I'd love any feedback I can get.
Specific Crit Requests: Not so much!

Also, I'll make a fancy html table some other time.

[onlyanapple.livejournal.com]

I don't know her canon at all, but I'd like to give you huge kudos for getting her so involved when you're still so new. She's mingling around, gathering CR, and it's lovely to see. And she's a delight to thread with!

[boylolita.livejournal.com]

❧ Rose fluthlu
Time in Para: 2.5 months
Canon point: shortly before "Rose: Go dark."
Loss: the magic cue ball, and the ability to obtain another
Notes: I still feel like she's missing something. She gets too wordy sometimes, and there's a level of snark that just isn't there. I'm working on it, but I could use any concrit you can give me!

⚡ Nico childofhades -
Time in Para: 8 months
Canon point: post-TLO
Loss: his demi-god powers
Notes: I know that he's been laying pretty low the past couple of months, but now that I've done a canon review and am working on correcting the things that were wrong with his voice, he should be a lot more active.


☮ Alex delincuente -
Time in Para: 5 months
Canon point: Night at the Lazerama
Loss: Ability to sleep past seven a.m.
Notes: Am I making her too nice? Sometimes I get halfway through a thread and think, "Wait, would she even be talking to this person for this long?"

❀ Hunny boylolita -
Time in Para: 7 months
Canon point: Jungle Pool SOS
Loss: Memories of Mori
Notes: Nothing specific.

❤ Gizmo gizmobunny -
I know I've really failed at activity this summer, but like I've explained to a few people, I've had some health issues that I really underestimated. I'm still trying to take things slow, but by next month I should be back up to speed.

[is0latedthinker.livejournal.com]

I really enjoyed Alex's posts during the pirate plot! They made me laugh because they sound just like something she'd do. Great job so far, maybe one day Alan will have to intervene in some of her antics.

[silentbutwinged.livejournal.com]

, is welcome as well.

[chatroomnurse.livejournal.com]

Wrong account but I love you Neku! He's wonderful and I'm glad to have you as a canon mate, even if I keep putting Rhyme in bad places (Noise loss, getting kidnapped).

[apologeticangel.livejournal.com]

• Personal: Honestly... I'm feeling weirdly shaky about all of my girls right now. I'm definitely going to dive into a cannon review for all of them. HOWEVER, I've been trying hard to be a better and faster tagger, and have been making a conscious effort to make sure that my inbox is empty each night when I go to bed. I hope it shows! However if it doesn't, please let me know. I don't want to be annoying to thread with ♥


• Colette: She's just been so serious lately, and it's making her sound really... mature? I worry she sounds too old, and too smart. I'm afraid that I'm losing my grip on how truly dumb Colette can be, and making her too insightful/older? I don't know, AM I THINKING TOO MUCH ABOUT THIS? People with CR with her, are you being derped at enough?


• Maya: Maya is also sounding really.. old. On one hand, that's kind of to be expected... she's been here for nearly three years, and she's growing up bit by bit. HOWEVER, on a more worrying note I feel like she's falling... flat? Are other people noticing this too, or is it just me?


• Nanako: I worry that her voice is becoming less distinctive, and that things that she says could be swapped out for what Colette says. Does she still sound like a child/have her distinct voice? And is she too... happy...?

[save-the-souls.livejournal.com]

I can only really speak about Colette but this is a problem that I can have too sometimes-

Considering how long Colette has been here and the sort of the stuff she's been through (getting killed by Cabot, Joshua, the pirate plot, losing friends all the time, etc), it's honestly understandable that she's growing more mature and smart than how she was in canon. That's all part of growing up, especially in an environment like Paradisa where unlike her canon world there isn't a shonen derp who can fix everything just through willpower, speeches and deus ex machina (cause yeah, as dark as TOS can be- Colette still has that hope that either sacrificing herself and/or Lloyd being a shonen will fix EVERYTHING). Frankly considering all the stuff she's been through...it would be a bit on the unbelievable and annoying side to see her fall for the exact same tricks she fell for in 2008.

But at the same time I can get wanting to retain the derp side. So possibly think about it coming up in random spots whenever you can - even if it's over minor moments. I tend to treat it like that for Allen, and I find that it makes for a great break from serious business if I've had my fill of it. Like if a conversation is getting too heavy, have her trip or get stuck on some...analogy some character uses. Or tag into open posts doing something completely derpy- which gives the other character a lot of stuff to react to beyond just "THEY WERE WALKING BY AND GLANCED OVER". That way you can keep the derp without it really being...making the character never develop at all?

IDK JUST MY OWN THOUGHTS ON IT.

Meg's Muses

[http://users.livejournal.com/_fredless/]

Fandom Name Here:AtS Winifred 'Fred' Burkle - _fredless
Loss: The 'false' memories Angel had given to gang for majority of Season Five
Canon Point:In between 'Smile Time' and 'A Hole in the World'.
A note : Since she is between the two I not consider the story about her from 'Angel:Yearbook' that takes place between the two episodes to be part of Fred's canon.
Notes:Fred has some great CR, and I am enjoying all of it. I have also tried to tag her around more. She has had some extreme highs and lows over the past six months but I am doing my best to stay true to character.
Specific Crit Requests:I got feedback last time that Fred needed more 'rambles' which I have made a specific effort to incorporate. I have also worked to give her more projects of a scientific bent.

Fandom Name Here:BtVS Willow Rosenberg - its_worthdoing
Loss:How to perform reensouling spell.
Canon Point: Directly following 'Wild at Heart' and Oz departing.
Notes: I have made an effort to tag Willow around more and get her involved more. She is slowly making new friends, as well as becoming more involved in running The Magic Box II. I also have her involvement planned out in multiple upcoming plots. Her voice was a struggle for a while, but time off of work allowed time for canon review.
Specific Crit Requests:Everything as always is welcome.

[daddyhost.livejournal.com]

I think you're very good at both of your characters, I am always amazed by how much I can hear Fred in the wording of your tags especially, but there is something about her I've been meaning to ask.

Is there a reason for how depressed she's been for the last few months?

It seems as though every post or log I've seen has been her either baking (while trying to get rid of her sadness) or being genuinely upset. I understand that events in game can pile up sometimes, but I haven't been able to find where a lot of it has come from and I wonder if I've missed it? I can understand her getting stressed about the pirate plot (as alternate dimensions) and Gunn arriving (with Wes and all), but this was going on quite a bit before the pirate plot and I just wondered what was causing it?

I've missed seeing Fred at her happier times; in canon she can be shown to be quite resilient and her quirky sense of humour is something I'd love to see more of! Apologies if this is wall o'text or not very clear, it's just something I thought I'd ask for clarification on.

[abiding.livejournal.com]

[molotov]

Dear Krissy,

I need you to tag more, because your characters are amazing and I can only go about 10 minutes before I need more of them. Thank you for your consideration regarding this manner.

♥

[inafadingcrown.livejournal.com]

Lord of the Rings: Galadriel - inafadingcrown
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://inafadingcrown.livejournal.com/707.html)
Loss: Nenya, her Ring of Power. No more nigh unbreakable force fields of protection for her.
Canon Point: After healing the newly resurrected Gandalf. It's not "onscreen," so to give you some idea, Gandalf arrives in Lorien just as the Fellowship are leaving
Notes: Uh, I'm just now coming out of a funk, so that's why my tagging has been majorly inconsistent. I also feel that my Tolkien-esque prose has been suffering for the same reason and I'm working on that.
Specific Crit Requests: I'm working on finding the balance of keeping her voice as it is in canon and adapting her to new situations. We really don't see her in a lot of informal circumstances, for example. My biggest worry is that I'm falling into generic elf voice. When she's just speaking casually, does it seem like a logical extension of how her canon self would speak?

[exanimatus.livejournal.com]

I'm kind of failure at stalking, so I only have my own experience to go off of, but I'm super-impressed with your ability to balance informal situations and the character's voice. The extension seems pretty darn seamless and sensible to me. I mean--Galadriel was sitting around on the floor stacking dominoes, but she sounded... exactly like I imagine she would sound... if she were doing something so silly. Still very much like herself, but at an appropriate level.

and now I want Zelman to convince her to do silly things forever. sdfjskld.

[ofmywill.livejournal.com]

It has been a very stressful couple of months, rl-wise, so my characterisation has probably not been at its greatest. Sorry about that! I do recall the points made by Nita last time around re: him being a little too open and a little too talkative, which is always the difficult point of playing a silent protagonist. I will continue to work on that! But if there's anything else, do let me know.

Karkat has been dropped. Apologies to everyone there, but as above, lots of stress meant letting something go. :(

[daddyhost.livejournal.com]

I have no real crit, other than wanting to see you around more for stalkables =D

[heart0fsword.livejournal.com]

Rurouni Kenshin: Himura Kenshin - heart0fsword
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://heart0fsword.livejournal.com/5542.html)
Loss: Kaoru dismissing his being Battousai and asking him to stay at the dojo (so basically the feeling of acceptance and being a 'normal swordsman')
Canon Point: The very beginning of the Kyoto arc just before Saitou makes his appearance
Notes: I've been really slow this month and brain dead from work so I haven't gotten him out as much (or posted yet *sob*). I know I need to get him more involved with the Riful and peace patrol stuff but my brain just hasn't wanted to deal with it as of yet ><; and it always gets really difficult with his vow when this stuff comes up
Specific Crit Requests: Anything anyone wants to hit me with~

[daddyhost.livejournal.com]

I don't know the canon at all, but I'm impressed with how you jumped in and tagged around. You are friendly and approachable OOC, and it's a pleasure to plot with you.

[innate.livejournal.com]

✘ Xenosaga: - variare
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://variare.livejournal.com/604.html)
Loss: Albedo’s presence in his subconscious.
Canon Point: Post-Xenosaga III
Notes: PASTRY CHEF. The end.

✘ Chrono Crusade: - fastest
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://fastest.livejournal.com/725.html)
Loss: Any and all recollection of his sister. In canon, due to how the horns affected Joshua's sanity, he had forgotten her face. In Paradisa, he'll have forgotten everything, only knowing that he has a sister and he wants to find her again.
Canon Point: Chapter 44
Notes: Ever since he lost his horns, I've been trying to find a balance for how to portray Joshua as 'sane'. Unfortunately the manga didn't really have much to work off of because it's just a big battle and then it skips ahead several years where he's all fine. In the anime it takes the opposite extreme and he turns completely mentally unstable. So I've been trying to meet it somewhere in the middle, and I don't know if it's shown...
Specific Crit Requests: If you have any questions about what's been going on with Joshua, please let me know! I'm sure someone out there is confused, especially if you don't follow every single thread.

✘ Rurouni Kenshin: - ascensional
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://ascensional.livejournal.com/3842.html)
Loss: Her ability to be alone for more than twelve hours. If she remains by herself for longer than this, she'll start hearing voices -- specifically that of Kiyosato's or Kenshin's.
Canon Point: Her death.
Notes: I'll admit I've been struggling with her as of late. I'm not as inspired to make posts with her, and though commenting around is still fun, I know I've been doing less of it. I go through phases like this sometimes with such a quiet character, so I'll do my best to pull through it, and I'm sorry for anyone this has affected!
Specific Crit Requests: I've been trying to handle her situation with Kenshin as delicately as possible and not rush into anything, but I'm worried her POV and reasoning isn't being made clear, or that it could be OOC, I'm not sure. Let me know?

✘ Smallville: - luthored
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://luthored.livejournal.com/4717.html)
Loss: Her romantic feelings for Clark.
Canon Point: After 6x16 "Promise"

[daddyhost.livejournal.com]

I realise a lot has been going on with Jr. involving Riful and battles and serious plot stuff, and the Host Club is a silly crack event that as a character he's not very involved in, but I'd like to bring it up just briefly.

If he no longer has the time or inclination (or OOCly you no longer have the inclination either) to be part of the club, I swear I won't be offended. I would LOVE him to still be part of it, their CR makes me laugh like a crazy person, but it's quite hard without knowing if I'm supposedly assuming he's there or if he's ICly missing and should be stalked down by idiot boy to make sure he's not dead.

Sorry if this didn't make sense ):

[foolreversed]

Tohru Adachi (fool_in_reverse) Shin Megami Tensei: Persona 4 Loss: his memories of Ryotaro Dojima Canon Point: post game Been in Paradisa since March 11th, 2011!

Concerns: Lately, I've admittedly been a little unsure of myself in a couple of threads: Adachi's been going through quite a bit lately and there's been some situations where I've just had to wing things/try to sound as IC and natural as possible. Hopefully I'm still doing okay but fjghdjkvsdx (> x <)

[daddyhost.livejournal.com]

I really enjoy seeing Adachi around, and I'd love to have more CR with him, with any of my characters. =D

[hasnoneeds.livejournal.com]

Touhou Project: Komachi Onozuka - hasnoneeds
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://hasnoneeds.livejournal.com/718.html) (optional)
Loss: Her immortality
Canon Point: Recent canon (including Oriental Sacred Place and Wild and Horned Hermit.)
Notes: Been having a hard time getting her motivated, since she's a slacker she really does best when there are others to pressure her.
Specific Crit Requests: I want to know what I can do to make her more approachable.

[daddyhost.livejournal.com]

Perhaps try having her wander into more action posts (like the ones in the lobby/kitchen) and have her make CR that way?

[checkbelowdecks.livejournal.com]

Mai HiME: Kuga Natsuki sexyhitchhiker
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://sexyhitchhiker.livejournal.com/784.html) (optional)
Loss: Memories of mother's face
Canon Point: Right before destroying the star
Notes: I think I have to get her out more.
Specific Crit Requests: Anything you've got for me.

Dragon Age: Isabela - checkbelowdecks
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://checkbelowdecks.livejournal.com/797.html) (optional)
Loss: Inability to cheat at cards
Canon Point: Just before the beginning of Act III
Specific Crit Requests: New character! Tell me everything. Is she too pushy, should she stop hitting on your character, etc.

[chartharsis.livejournal.com]

Never, ever, EVER stop hitting on my character, Isabela. EVER.

[succubitch]

Angel: The Series: Lilah Morgan - buryyoualive
Loss: When asked about her evil plots, she'll be compelled to spill the truth about them.
Canon Point: The end of 4x01, "Deep Down"
Notes: I do hope that once the Damon plot is resolved to get her up to more evil scheming sort of stuff because she just hasn't done much of that here yet. And that should change.
Specific Crit Requests: None that I can think of. But feel free to mention any you might have about Lilah or me.

[daddyhost.livejournal.com]

I think you have the personality of Lilah down very well, and it's always fun to read her threads as I can hear her voice in your tags.

[justcharles.livejournal.com]

X-Men: First Class: Charles Xavier - justcharles
Loss: His memories of the Cuba Incident
Canon Point: Post-movie
Notes: Obviously, I just started with him. His Permissions Post (http://justcharles.livejournal.com/710.html) is a pretty big deal, so I want everyone to fill it out when they get a chance.
Specific Crit Requests: How is he? Am I too god-modey with his telepathy? Too flirtatious? Lemme know!

New Warriors: Jonothan Starsmore - decibel_chamber
Loss: His memories of Paige Guthrie, Jubilation Lee, and Angelo Espinosa.
Canon Point: Post-New Warriors
Notes: Of all my characters, Jono's the one I'm most comfortable with. He's always open to more CR of basically ALL types. Seriously, have at him.
Specific Crit Requests: I can't think of anything specific, just whatever you can think of is cool by me.

Pushing Daisies: Ned - resurrects_pies
Loss: His ability to make the dead Alive Again.
Canon Point: End of the series, just before he and Chuck go to see her aunts.
Notes: I've been struggling with Ned a little. It isn't for lack of voice, as Ned's voice is pretty easy, but he desperately needs CR. I've been meaning to get him going at the Pie Hole, but due too poor timing on my part, I haven't gotten that going.
Specific Crit Requests: Again, whatever you can think of is fine.

Metal Gear Solid: Jack "Raiden" Sears - alabaster_blood
Loss: His memories of Rosemary.
Canon Point: Just before Old Snake uploads the FOXALIVE virus into GW on Outer Haven.
Notes: My CR with Raiden has been really random, and I've loved it. He needs more friends, people to remind him that he's human at his core.
Specific Crit Requests: Sensing a pattern? Lay it on me, whatever it is.


I may drop either Ned or Raiden, I haven't made up my mind yet. I don't want to, but I'm finding 4 characters to be a bit of a struggle. Input on that would be appreciated as well <3

[chatroomnurse.livejournal.com]

Wrong account, but I love Rhyme's CR with Jono!

And I keep meaning to throw Anri at Charles, I just keep missing his posts jgfjgfhghjhvhj.

As for the other two, I haven't really seen them around all that much, so I can't help there.