HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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[notmyfaultwall.livejournal.com]

Red vs. Blue: Michael J. Caboose - notmyfaultwall
Loss: His super strength
Canon Point: Revelation: Chapter 20
Notes: I know he’s really, really new, but anything you can throw my way’s appreciated!
Specific Crit Requests: Caboose’s speech patterns sound really strange. There are random pauses, and sometimes there are full stops in the middle of his sentences. Am I doing a good job of portraying that?

Also, do you prefer. The full stops. Or do you like, the short, pauses, instead? Or. Does it work best. As, a joint thing?

Alsosometimeshespeedsuphisspeech. Is that annoying? Should I just put [said very quickly] instead?

[fishy-go-byebye.livejournal.com]

I think I like the combo of stops and pauses, and... [said very quickly] is easier to read, but I always kinda liked deciphering long strung together sentences...

[chartharsis.livejournal.com]

What she said. <3

[silentbutwinged.livejournal.com]

From what I've seen of your Caboose he's absolutely spot on. I really look forward to seeing him in the future!

As for the speech stuff, I personally like the combo on the stops and pauses and I like how allthewordsmashedtogether displays the quick talking and also adds a level of hard to understand because when people talk that fast they are hard to understand.

[kungfuwitch.livejournal.com]

I like the combo of stops and pauses and crazyspedupspeech. Seriously, though, I love his and Eleven's conversation so much that it hurts my brain.

In short: You're amazing :D

[daddyhost.livejournal.com]

The run together text doesn't bother me at all, as long as it's not used for a huge sentence of MASSIVE.