I'm kind of failure at stalking, so I only have my own experience to go off of, but I'm super-impressed with your ability to balance informal situations and the character's voice. The extension seems pretty darn seamless and sensible to me. I mean--Galadriel was sitting around on the floor stacking dominoes, but she sounded... exactly like I imagine she would sound... if she were doing something so silly. Still very much like herself, but at an appropriate level.

and now I want Zelman to convince her to do silly things forever. sdfjskld.