HOW'S MY DRIVING?

[paradisamods]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Comment with the names of the characters you play for feedback on your roleplaying. Other players will then reply to your comment telling you what they honestly think in a constructive manner. While both praise and critique is welcome, we'd like to remind you that this is a valuable tool for many of our members. We'd like to request that all comments remain constructive.

While the staff highly encourages everyone to participate, only comment if you are capable of giving and taking potentially harsh concrit in a mature, level-headed manner. Assume good faith at all times. Crit is meant to be resolved, not "won". Give mutual respect for each other's work and ideas. Aggressiveness creates unproductive stress and conflict. If you are emotionally compromised, you are not fit to captain the Starship Enterprise need to step back, take a break, and then return when you're ready.

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Comments

[senri.livejournal.com]

Thanks for your thoughtful response ♥

Anyway, playing subtle can sometimes be hard. To work on that, I'd suggest maybe writing some fanfic with her - just brief things, even, with her in everyday situations, focusing on specific feelings and playing with figuring out how those feelings are expressed from the outside. Writing yourself a little more deeply into her head might be a help in Paradisa, where really we write in a very condensed way a lot of the time with action tags. Practice will always help! Also, if you notice characters like her in other mediums, maybe observe how their responses to things are portrayed, it could also help. I realize it can be tough to do this kind of thing.

Anyway, that was really all I wanted to say, and I wish you good luck and hope you enjoy those icons :)

[rhymebell.livejournal.com]

/enjoys icons

No, thank you for the crit. I like to know how or where I need to improve, that's always really helpful to me.

[senri.livejournal.com]

You've accepted all crit really gracefully. Practice will make things better, and we all have things to work on, not just you. Good luck!