HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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Comments

[fanassaults.livejournal.com]

Echoing the others. If you ever need help dragging characters out, I am more than happy to help with all of them!

Sob, the saddest thing is that you are directly responsible for me reading Shiawase and Power Girl, so! Aside from what you've already mentioned regarding Uru, I really don't see much you can improve on...Peej and Aki are both spot-on, I think, and only need to get out a bit more! The only thought that comes off the top of my head is that they're both very much team players; Uru makes friends with everyone so that's not so bad, but considering their respective positions in Superhero League something something idk the names and SEES, getting them more involved with all the heroes/all the Persona-users might be a start on getting them more active!

Remember, you can do it, Nita! I believe in you completelyyyy.

[advocacies.livejournal.com]

do you find uru has regressed in any way in para? i'm worried she comes off too mature or too sad. the slenderman plot is fresh in her head but i have plans already to let her cool off from that.

you're right about that. all of mine are team players (well kate i am literally ?_? DC WHYYYY) and i should be focusing on that again. i'm been trying to have karen tag around more and let her slowly become my main focus. i will definitely work on this, though. thank you!

thank you again, jonesy. :D /FEELS A SURGE OF CONFIDENCE BECAUSE OF THIS COMMENT ♥

[fanassaults.livejournal.com]

Honestly, it's been so long since I read it - or stopped, since that new translator makes my English major very sad - but...a little, yeah! Not so much the too mature since Uru was always mature - living on her own, paying the bills, working diligently and still going to school - but Para does seem to have beaten her optimism out of her a bit. Maybe a canon bump would help.

...not gonna lie, this makes me happy just because I can get CR with Karen. *^* But yes! Another sudden idea would be her rollin' with the Marvel heroes as well. I'm sure she'd be interested in finding out more about all these dudes with powers that she doesn't know of, too. Karen's a smart girl and Aki is...in a sweatervest!

YOU'RE WELCOME, DAHLING. Just remember to take it at your own pace!

[wornbright.livejournal.com]

yeah, i won't lie about how a lot of events had taken a toll on uru. she's good with dealing with like, someone hurting HER, but when everyone around her are the targets she goes into a bit of a panic mode. i was thinking about a canon bump but it's not a lot since lol translators. god, this series will never be finished.

yep! she's already been talking to some of the x-factor gang, maybe i'll poke one of the new mutants too.

♥