HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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Comments

[siebter.livejournal.com]

aah, colette is really sweet and nice and adorbs-- just like in canon, so that's good! i don't see her as boring or flat or anything like that, promise! and nanako is the cutest thing ever omg. c: js.

Re: wow this one is long

[givingchase.livejournal.com]

Thank you for phrasing this so respectfully, anon! I'm putting this under really serious consideration and I do think it's best in the long run that I dropped someone. I'm just... waffling over who, to be honest. I love all my characters and it's gonna be tough letting one go.

Maybe I should give myself a time limit, because waffling is only gonna get me so far. :/ Hmm... I guess I should drop someone by this summer? And I should know who I'm dropping by next... weeeeek. Someone hold me to this! I have no willpower whatsoever.

[givingchase.livejournal.com]

SCRE

[siebter.livejournal.com]

canon-blind, so i don't have any real crit for her, but i do want to say how i really enjoy our threads; i love having threads that keep going, so that's awesome, and i always enjoy seeing new facets of her character revealed through our interactions. NEVER LEAVE, etc. c:

[siebter.livejournal.com]

asukaaaaa. i love seeing that less angry side of her in threads-- i mean, sure, she's fun when she's angry, but it's also really neat to see her being more friendly (and i'd totally love to see that happen with other characters), even though she is a character that's hard to really get involved.

/not helpful at all D:

[jammin-with-ed.livejournal.com]

I don't have any CR with Joshua, so I can't comment on his clarity, but after having had 3 of my guys hanging with Dave I have to say

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!

I adore your Dave, so very very much. I, personally, haven't had any issues following him, but I say go with whatever helps the most people understand the guy.

[jammin-with-ed.livejournal.com]

You're welcome! <3

Heee. I'm also Darien Fawkes and Nora Diniro (and Paul Smecker, but he's going home soon)

[siebter.livejournal.com]

ilu, both ic and ooc. you and your characters that i've threaded with are made of fabulous. that is all. ♥

[siebter.livejournal.com]

butts

3 3 3 3 3 3 3 3 3 3 3

[nishimono.livejournal.com]

HUHU 8> I will make a note of this~! Many minds = good things--I look forward to seen Eleven *_*

[orz-woeisme.livejournal.com]

xlkjgdkgs *A* YOU are fabulous.....

[siebter.livejournal.com]

well, i think with the latest break in D: coming up soon, that should hopefully help with uru's lack of happy. emil will gladly spend time with her, too ;w; that way, she can get a break too. but i absolutely adore her and would love to see her stay here.

[siebter.livejournal.com]

NO YOU

[jammin-with-ed.livejournal.com]

He's heard so much about her, he's looking forward to meeting her, too :P

[siebter.livejournal.com]

oh my, there's two more i should still...hahaha no i would feel bad just bugging all of your characters, but seriously, the ones i've threaded with, i've loved. ♥

[jammin-with-ed.livejournal.com]

Awww Thank you!! And bug away! I don't mind at all.

[siebter.livejournal.com]

i've really enjoyed the threads we've had! ed is amusingly silly and...well, childishly goofy, so i don't think that's too much of a problem!! as for the doctor, i've not watched his series yet, so i don't really have much to comment about, but he's an enjoyable character; same goes for gosalyn!

[marionttepurple.livejournal.com]

Let me just say...Emil is adorable LIKE HE SHOULD BE. I've only interacted with him a few times with my other muse, but I can practically hear Julie Anne Taylor when I read your tags. Him rushing back to try to petrify Slenderman was exactly the type of thing he would do.

Just out of curiosity, are you planning to canon update him? To...five years later or when he turns into a skeleton...8|

so I have no real crit

but I think he should make a bad joke or two

eoiwjflkajs I never got what was so punny about..."charwolfsma"

[bedninja]

....SOB

why u do dis to me bb

[jammin-with-ed.livejournal.com]

Thank you! And watch Doctor Who. Watch iiiiiiiiiit!!

[siebter.livejournal.com]

b-but i have no tv at college D:

[siebter.livejournal.com]

bcuz ʘ‿ʘ

[jammin-with-ed.livejournal.com]

That's what the computer is for! :D

[succubitch]

Exactly :x

[siebter.livejournal.com]

kasdjf thank you so much-- ....i won't lie i have to read his tags out loud before i post them to make sure i can too, it's SO LAME but...i guess it works, so thank you!!

but i wasn't planning on permanently canon updating him to HOLY SHIT WHAT IS THAT emil, but i do want to do that for a loss. (i might update him to after the timeskip, though, just so he's more aware of why he is how he is.)

but ohhh man i really want to-- i think my main issue with him not really making bad jokes here is that we didn't get much of a feel for that in canon; the grimoire nier translations didn't really give us much of that, so i'd like to get my hands on it myself, to see if i could get a better handle on his brand of humor, but i'll definitely see what i could do!