HOW'S MY DRIVING?

[paradisamods]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Comment with the names of the characters you play for feedback on your roleplaying. Other players will then reply to your comment telling you what they honestly think in a constructive manner. While both praise and critique is welcome, we'd like to remind you that this is a valuable tool for many of our members. We'd like to request that all comments remain constructive.

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Leon

[compromisedarrow]

Marvel Cinematic Universe: Clint Barton - compromisedarrow
Loss: Memories of Natasha Romanoff
Canon Point: After crashing through the window at The Battle For New York
Notes: Went through a canon reset since the last HMD as a response to crit.


Stargate: Atlantis: Dr. Carson Beckett - atadiscoverer
Loss: Memories of meaningful achievements while on Atlantis
Canon Point: 03x17 - "Sunday"

Halo: Reach: Jorge-052 - noblefive
Loss: Memories of Dr. Catherine Halsey
Canon Point: End of Operation: UPPERCUT

Charmed: Cole Turner - demontobeloved
Loss: Memories of Phoebe Halliwell
Canon Point: 04x08 - "Black as Cole"

The Walking Dead: Daryl Dixon - squirrelhunter
Loss: Memories of Merle Dixon
Canon Point: 02x05 - "Chupacabra"

Sirens: Stuart Bayldon - fuckinghateadrenaline
Loss: Memories of his baby half-brother Stuart
Canon Point: 01x06 - "Cry"

[the_effect_she_has]

The Hunger Games: Katniss Everdeen - the_effect_she_has
Loss: Her pin
Canon Point: End of 'The Mockingjay', right after she kills Coin
Notes: She's brand-spanking new, so I would like to know how I'm doing?

[knight_2000]

Fandom Name Here: KITT - knight_2000
Loss: His automobile body
Canon Point: Immediately post-series
Notes: Trying to get him more involved
Specific Crit Requests: Hit me up!

[psych0p0mps]

Homestuck: Aradia Megido - psych0p0mps
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (optional)
Loss: resistance to mind control
Canon Point: after A6I1
Notes: yes i know my activity has been shitty i'm trying to get back on the wagon though. just my home and work situations have been stressing me out a bit. okay a lot. and i tend to be at work or asleep when everybody else is online. but i'm doing therapy and shit and i finally got my meds balanced i think so there's that.
Specific Crit Requests: uhh idk? sometimes i worry that i'm letting the castle get to her too much. i mean, a lot has happened in her year and a half in paradisa, and she doesn't shrug things off as a sidequest like she used to. but i don't know. too much? too little? her voice is still really strong, i just wonder if it needs a nudge here or there.