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ANIMANGA APPLICATIONS ☆

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If you wish to apply for a character from any animanga fandom ( i.e. BLEACH, D.Gray-man, etc. ), then please copy and paste the form in the box below into a new comment to this post. Please post the application directly to the post, do not link it from another journal. Your application will be screened to prevent others from seeing it. A mod or helper will reply to it in a timely fashion.

If you are applying for a character you reserved recently, please put 'Reserved Character - ( Character Name )' on the subject line.

If your application does not fit into one comment, split your application into as many comments are needed. You can mark them as part 1, part 2, etc if you feel the need.

Please space your paragraphs properly; improper spacing may be grounds for a decline over writing quality.

<b>NAME:</b> [ Your name or nickname. ] <b>JOURNAL:</b> [ This is your personal journal, not your character's journal. ] <b>EMAIL:</b> [ Provide an e-mail address at which the mods and your fellow players may reliably reach you if necessary. This is REQUIRED. ] <b>AIM:</b> [ Provide an AOL Instant Messenger screen name at which you may be contacted. This is optional, but can be good for plotting and role playing out scenes. ] <b>WIKI NAME:</b> [ Username on the wiki, if applicable. ] <b>CHARACTERS:</b> [ List all the characters you have as of now, if applicable. We will review your activity before considering your application. ] <b>CHARACTER NAME:</b> [ Self-explanatory, yes? ] <b>FANDOM:</b> [ Where are they from? ] <b>CANON:</b> [ After which point in their canon storyline does the character enter Paradisa? ] <b>WHAT THEY LOST:</b> [ Provide a realistic loss for your character that will affect them in some distinct fashion, and explain why it is important to them] <B>ABOUT THE CHARACTER:</b> [ Provide a couple of paragraphs about the character you're applying for. Make sure to cover all that is relevant; their personality, their background. THIS MUST BE 500 WORDS or longer. But keep in mind that we do read these so have it be concise and work for quality, not quantity. It'll be a great measure of your characterization and understanding of the character. For a more detailed version of what we're looking for, please see <a href=http://paradisa.wikia.com/wiki/What_We%27re_Looking_For_On_Applications#Tips_on_Writing_Good_Character_Descriptions>What We're Looking For.</a> ] <b>ABILITIES:</b> [ Provide a decent explanation of the general abilities your character can use. Links are welcome here if the character has too many abilities to expand on here, but we want to get a good feel for what your character is capable of. If your character has no powers, leave this section blank.] <b>THIRD-PERSON WRITING SAMPLE:</b> [ Write a couple of paragraphs in third person of your character doing something. Anything. Eating dinner. Fighting their archenemy. Showing up in Paradisa. Whatever. THIS MUST BE 250 WORDS OR LONGER. It's used as a measure of your characterization and writing ability.] <b>FIRST-PERSON WRITING SAMPLE: </b> [ This should be in first person, as if the character were making an entry in their journal. It MUST be five sentences or longer and should show that you have a grasp of the character's unique voice.] <b>INTENT: </b> [ What draws you to play this particular character? Ideally, what would you like to do with the character in Paradisa? It's alright if you don't know yet; we're just curious. ]

Typical staff for the section: Ashley, Ruru

Comments

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc and paradisabeyond. Also, if you aren't already listed under the contact list, then please comment here after registering. Thank you!

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc and paradisabeyond. Also, if you aren't already listed under the contact list, then please comment here after registering. Thank you!

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.

REVISE

[paradisamods]

At this time, we would like to request a revised application. Your "About the Character" section must be a minimum of 500 words long. Aside from the section being short, it doesn't really take an in-depth look at the character, his motivations, or his history. Thanks!

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.

REVISE

[paradisamods]

At this time we would like to request revised samples to help us better gauge your handle on characterization. As well, the loss chosen for this character cannot be used since it comes from the manga as opposed to the anime, which is what this character is being apped from. The two versions of the series are currently too different to link the two together properly (and as the events in the manga are different than the anime--which has been given and definite ending--this loss isn't really acceptable).

Please select a new loss for this character. :) Thanks!

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.

REVISE

[paradisamods]

At this time we would like to request a revised "about the character" section and 3rd person sample to help us better gauge characterization. A focus on personality would be great! (Since while there was information it was a bit hard to get a clear picture of his characterization with all the extra minute details provided & the jumping back and forth between his past and present self. Try to focus on the character's personality from his apped canon point, as while the background info is helpful it's more important to get a feel for who he is now!)

Thanks! :)

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.

REVISE

[paradisamods]

At this time we would like to request a revised "about the character" section as while a recount of canon events and history can be useful, the main focus of this section should be predominantly about "who they are" rather than "what they've done". Tying in past events to growth and development is fine but an entire account of everything they've done isn't necessary :) Just expand upon the personality, drives, motives, how they came to be the way they are etc.

We would also like to request a second 1st-person sample to help us better gauge characterization. Thanks!

REVISE

[paradisamods]

Yes, please break it up into several comments :) You can reply in as many comments as needed.

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

An important note: I'm not sure if your samples were indicative of your intention upon bringing him back, but Akira will not remember being in Paradisa the first time. His memories/CR will be wiped clean upon his return.

That said, your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc and paradisabeyond. Also, if you aren't already listed under the contact list, then please comment here after registering. Thank you!

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc and paradisabeyond. Also, if you aren't already listed under the contact list, then please comment here after registering. Thank you!

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc and paradisabeyond. Also, if you aren't already listed under the contact list, then please comment here after registering. Thank you!

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc and paradisabeyond. Also, if you aren't already listed under the contact list, then please comment here after registering. Thank you!

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.

APPROVED

[paradisamods]

Your application has been approved. Go ahead and create your character journal, then comment on this entry and join paradisa, paradisalogs, paradisaooc, paradisawatch and paradisabeyond. Optionally, you can also join yuuyuupandaland, Paradisa's crack/meme comm. Also, if you aren't already listed under the wiki's Contact List, then please comment here after registering. Thank you.