At this time we would like to request a revised "about the character" section as while a recount of canon events and history can be useful, the main focus of this section should be predominantly about "who they are" rather than "what they've done". Tying in past events to growth and development is fine but an entire account of everything they've done isn't necessary :) Just expand upon the personality, drives, motives, how they came to be the way they are etc.
We would also like to request a second 1st-person sample to help us better gauge characterization. Thanks!
REVISE
We would also like to request a second 1st-person sample to help us better gauge characterization. Thanks!