paradisaooc | HOW'S MY DRIVING?

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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Idk who that other anon is, lol. And while I find your tl;dr brick of "yeah, I won't take crit and my friends think I'm awesome so stfu" text annoying and immature, whatever. The issue is that you use too many italics and in the wrong places. Reading your tags allowed is awkward and weird, because you seem to pick words to use an i tag on at random. Italics should be used where verbal emphasis would fall, and you just shove them in there willynilly.

Also, just an fyi telling someone you're just too good for their crit makes you come off like a douche. I had no issues tagging you before now, but your attitude makes me think twice where your lack of mechanics skill didn't.

reading them aloud not allowed herp derp derp.

Oh okay I thought the other anon was you. Especially since you ... commented around the same time after no response for so long. But ty for clarifying.

And that's ... not at all what my block of text says. It says because I don't know if you know TVD, I asked around and checked with the people who I know that do know it. They confirmed that they think frequent italics are appropriate and necessary. And I'm not saying that I'm too good for your crit either, I specifically said that I see where you're coming from with it but that I happen to disagree.

It's a mechanical issue that is at the discretion of the player. I'm sorry that me disagreeing with you on a mechanical issue comes at the cost of tagging with you. I really am. But I place my italics where I hear the verbal emphasis falling in Damon's voice. Not at random. So ... sorry. I don't know what else to tell you, anon, honestly.

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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