HOW'S MY DRIVING?

[paradisamods]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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Comments

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

[I have company coming over tonight, so I might be scarce while I get ready for that, but I will tag around...either before they get here or tomorrow. <3]

[cloakand_danger]

I can't offer much for the others, but you really don't need to worry about getting Booth's voice wrong. I love the show, and I love reading Booth's posts because I can hear his voice so well. Especially when he's tagging back and forth with Bones, but the rest of the time, too, he makes me smile when I stalk him because he's just like he always was, just...learning to cope with the whole 'magical castle' thing.

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

I really can't tell you how much that means. I've been canon reviewing like woah, and I'm glad it's coming across. Thank you so much. <3

[dancinpenguins]

You're such a reliable CR mate, and it always, always makes me smile.

♥

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

<3 <3 <3

[walkinthruwalls]

So I only know Booth and while I've not been here to see much, the thread I saw with him and Bones was pretty much perfect. Your voice for him is amazing :]

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

That is really excellent to hear! I'm hoping to get him and my others out a bit more once I cut my cast down. I want him to interact more with non-castmates. But that is really, really encouraging.

[likethetragedy.livejournal.com]

I'm just dropping a line here to let you know I really have respected everything you've done with Booth particularly in regards to the Isis situation. You've done a great job with him so far and I hope I get the chance to play with him in the future.

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

I hope so too! I think he and Elektra might get along pretty well, Y/N? I'd be willing to give it a shot, at least. :D

[likethetragedy.livejournal.com]

Strong, friendly guy with a good sense of humor? Yeah she'll definitely like him. I'd love to have CR with these two.

[end-0f-line.livejournal.com]

Kaylee is absolutely adorable, and while I've never seen more than a few minutes of Firefly, she really does make my day. <3

Puddleglum is...just...he's perfect. I love his threads, I loved being able to tag him with Liadrin, and I love how you always manage to dance that delicate edge that is his miserable, yet interesting and charming personality.

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you like her! I need to have her tag Clu more, because that thread was so fun.

b'awww, Puddle. I'm really, really going to miss him. It means a lot that you liked him, though, and hopefully he won't be gone too incredibly long.

[end-0f-line.livejournal.com]

I hope not either. ;^; he is one of my favorites.

[bigbad]

I love your Booth so much. I love his rivalry with Spike and I seriously stalk every conversation ever he has with Bones. So... don't worry, you're doing awesome.

ETA I can comment on Kaylee too! ...but not constructively. She's awesome too.

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

slkdjfksdl. I'm so, so glad! And I'm really sorry if I've been slacking with threads with him. I adore his banter with Spike. It's really one of my favorite bits of CR with him. ^.^

[gottaknockhard.livejournal.com]

Can I say how much I adore Kaylee? She's such a refreshing character to see, and you play her so naturally. All her boy trouble amuses me to no end, because it's so... true to life haha. Accents are really impossible for me, but I've never been grated by Kaylee's. They're very tricky!

And you're the sweetest person ever OOC. I don't know where I'd be without all of your encouragement! I really appreciate everything, and I will always be happy to plot with you into forever... :)

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

/flails

/steals all your CR ever

[truthin-bones.livejournal.com]

You really, really need to stop worrying about not being an active castmate. You're the most active Booth I've had the pleasure to play against in a good year and, given the oh so lovely timezone difference that I caused with my temporary move to Israel, that's really saying something. You follow up on our threads and don't let them drop when they really ought to be continued and you do tag with decent speed given your load. Please stop worrying. I love playing against your Booth too much to ever really care if you're a bit slow.

As for his voice, I still think he's wonderful. So, so easy to play Brennan off of and I can hear his voice so clearly whenever I read his threads. And you're so easy to plot with, too. It's a dream. Really.

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

/loves

[truthin-bones.livejournal.com]

/loves back

you ALWAYS get my hug icons

[ectobabble.livejournal.com]

You've been through A LOT of crap OOCly lately, and ... in spite of that, you've still remained a wonderful player. I think it bears saying that you're CONSTANTLY conscious of how you're doing, and you don't just start fretting once HMD rolls around - you're always looking for ways to improve, and things to do. You don't just canon review when someone suggests it, it's a constant process, and you keep in touch with your characters amazingly well.

That being said, you know how I feel about your drops, nudge nudge wink wink squee say no more.

And I'm always on an account that doesn't have one. /sob

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

/huuuugs

I am so grateful for the awesome players we have in this game. Thank you, hon. That means a lot.