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VIDEO GAME APPLICATIONS ☆

If you wish to apply for a character from any video game fandom ( i.e. Final Fantasy, Kingdom Hearts, Resident Evil, etc. ), then please copy and paste the form in the box below into a new comment to this post. Your application will be screened to prevent others from seeing it. A mod or helper will reply to it in a timely fashion.

If you are applying for a character you reserved recently, please put 'Reserved Character - ( Character Name )' on the subject line.

NAME: [ Your name or nickname. Just something we can call you by. ]
JOURNAL: [ This is your personal journal, not your character's journal. ]
EMAIL: [ Provide an e-mail address at which the mods and your fellow players may reliably reach you if necessary. This is REQUIRED. ]
AIM: [ Provide an AOL Instant Messenger screen name at which you may be contacted. This is optional, but can be good for plotting and role playing out scenes. ]
WIKI NAME: [ Username on the wiki. ]
CHARACTERS: [ List all the characters you have as of now, if applicable. We will review your activity before considering your application; you must have at least one update per character in order to obtain a new one. ]

CHARACTER NAME: [ Self-explanatory, yes? ]
FANDOM: [ Where are they from? ]
CANON: [ After which point in their canon storyline does the character enter Paradisa? ]
WHAT THEY LOST: [ Provide a realistic loss for your character that will affect them in some distinct fashion. They can’t lose something they would logically lose upon arriving to Paradisa, like their house or something. ]

PERSONALITY: [ Provide a couple of paragraphs of the character you're applying for. Make sure to get all of their aspects of their personality. THIS MUST BE 250 WORDS or longer. But keep in mind that we do read these so have it be concise and work for quality, not quantity. It'll be a great measure of your characterization and understanding of the character. Make sure to keep it free from spelling and grammar errors. ]

THIRD-PERSON WRITING SAMPLE: [ Write a couple of paragraphs in third person of your character doing something. Anything. Eating dinner. Fighting their archenemy. Showing up in Paradisa. Whatever. THIS MUST BE 250 WORDS OR LONGER, and yes, we do run a word count on these. It's used as a measure of your characterization and writing ability, and while it doesn't need to be stellar, it should be coherent and relatively free of spelling and grammar errors. ]

FIRST-PERSON WRITING SAMPLE: [ This should be in first person, as if the character were making an entry in their journal. It MUST be five sentences or longer and should show that you have a grasp of the character's unique voice. ]

Flat | Top-Level Comments Only

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Your application has been declined for the reason that we do not feel it captures the voice of the character correctly.

Additionally, we want to remind you to not join the community and start posting until your application has actually been looked over by one of the mods or helpers. We have repeatedly stated that in OOC notices. If you felt that your application had been looked over, emailing us has always been an option.

Keep that in mind if you plan on applying for anyone else.

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DECLINED