HOW'S MY DRIVING?

[paradisamods]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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Comments

[sockingly]

Aside from the impeccable castmates and the world plot, might I ask what's motivating you to keep Raine around for a second time around? I know the latter half of her first stay here turned out to be something of a strain and with your activity not being "stellar" these days, I'm just wondering if there are going to be some future goals or ambitions for her, so to speak.

[ruin_mania]

Hi! Couple of reasons, really. Aside from the world plot and cast which are both good reasons on their own, I feel like Raine really hits a different demographic than York. It's great to have someone who'll be interested in the magical side of things, who's interested in researching and comparing different worlds to find the common threads, and of course to have a female character in general to even up my scales. As far as long term goals I'd be thrilled to have her come to peace with some elves, though there are fewer now than when I reapped her, leave some tangible research on this place for future generations so they can continue to investigate the mystery, and of course continue to participate in the World Plot.