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HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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I can understand completely where you're coming from with Clark. Characters who are very action-orientated and need something to keep them driving onwards do tend to struggle here. And, as you've said, he's been here a very long time, you get to a point where you've done everything you wanted to do, and if you have a character that can sit by and chill in Para, that's cool, but if they're ones that need something to keep them going, it's a lot harder. ...I swear that made sense in my head. But yes, you do what you gotta do <3

As for Ezio, I'd be more than happy to throw some negative CR his way. Maladict would probably love to punch him in the face several times, or if you want male negative CR the Once-ler hates pretty much everyone, so take your pick and it shall be yours :)

Thank you 8( It's just so frustrating because it's like, I still want to write him... I just don't have anything left to write! Like I'm itching to drive but there is no fuel in the tank, or want to bake cookies but have no ingredients, blah blah blah metaphors and similes.

Ahah, I'd loooove that. Maladict might especially interesting because Ezio would be Very Unhappy but have trouble retaliating because... harming women ahahaha... and Once-ler, yessss. I don't have enough male CR, let alone negative male CR.

Yeah I get that, it's the primary reason why I ended up dropping characters like Fenris and John Marston. They just didn't have anything that forced them out and doing things, because the regular modern day life without their lives being threatened regularly just wasn't enough for them.

Then both you shall have, oh yes. ALL THE NEGATIVE CR. Well, except Crowley who thinks Ezio is cool. B)

Hahaha, tell me about it. Clark gets even trickier because he tends to take the mindset that "I should only handle things that people really cannot handle themselves, because otherwise people could grow dependent." That's how he is in all sorts of canons, he can't rob people of their opportunities to do what they want and explore and learn and grow... he can only keep an eye on things, not play Cosmic Babysitter.

Honestly, Ezio and Crowley need to hang out more so Crowley can mislead him about the future and Ezio can be like "so...... you're fucking with my religious upbringing/culture/all of society." B)

Of course, and by standing by he's left sort of kicking pebbles all 'well its good for THEM I guess ;;'

Yessss, Crowley would have so much fun with that. He seriously needs more guy friends.

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