HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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Comments

[onlyanapple.livejournal.com]

OKAY now I have more than an hour on the internet:

I only know Eleven's canon, but you play him brilliantly. My onyl crit is I'd like to see all three of them tagging around more. Perhaps now you're down to three, this will improve on it's own, I've certainly seen you out a bit more in the last week or so, which is good!

Just keep in mind to backtag a bit, because sometimes threads can fall quite a bit behind. But otherwise, I love your Eleven, you write him very very well.

[hulloeverything.livejournal.com]

Activity is definitely number one on my list of improvements. Phoebe's kind of taking the forefront right now, but that's mostly because of a loss and she's going to be part of the Riful plot.

I backtag as long as I can. It just gets to be slow going sometimes because my schedule is all over the place so some days I only have a few hours to catch up and tag around or post. I am trying to get better, though. Having only 3 has helped that quite a bit.

Thanks!

[mademyownpath.livejournal.com]

I'm glad to hear it! I have indeed noticed an improvement with just the three, t'was a good move for you! <3