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HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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Personal Notes: I know my activity has been pretty spotty all summer. I'm incredibly sorry, and that's something I'm trying to work on.

One thing I really want crit on is whether or not my balance has improved. When I still had Ten, I know I started heavily favoring Jilly and taking incredibly long to get back to Kaylee or Booth tags. I know I'm still not perfect, but I'd like to know if it's improved and/or where you'd like to see more changes?

As always, if you've noticed inconsistencies with voice and/or character actions, please don't hesitate to let me know. And if you prefer anonymous commenting, all my chars' journals have it enabled.

I am also on hiatus and leaving soon for tonight's show, so I apologize for being slow. I will be commenting around ASAP, though

Edited 2011-07-16 19:17 (UTC)

I think your balancing of the characters has improved, it's awesome to see Kaylee and Booth out and about just as much as Jilly =D

The only thing I would be careful of with Booth, is that quite a few of his recent posts have been heavily filtered and he's possibly the one I've seen tagging around least with non-canonmates. But that's not a massive problem by any means, and the balance has got WAY better.

<3

That's great to hear!

You're right about his last few posts being filtered. That's mostly been because of practice and the play. He tends to get a lot of responses, so I've been keeping his posts kind of locked down in order to keep myself sane. lol. But that is definitely going to change once this show wraps up its run next weekend. I want to start getting him out and about more as well. ^.^

Thank you for bringing it up. I will be aware of it, in case I start to slip in that direction in the future.

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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