HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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Alex Mercer

[cunning-carrier.livejournal.com]

Fandom Name Here: Alex Mercer - cunning_carrier
Loss: Power downgrade. Meaning he can no longer consume humans, imitate them, use his devastators, or his vision-based powers.
Canon Point: After the first game's end, but before the start of the second game.
Notes: While nowhere near higher DC/Marvel levels of power, Alex is still pretty uber-hax when it comes to a straight physical battle. That being said, I'm trying to avoid making him too god-mod, because that just makes fights boring. Alex is also trying to not hurt bystanders, so that hampers him a lot. This is a guy who can kill people by accidentally glancing them with a blow, and sometimes has a hard time controlling his strength, so he has to be very careful when innocents are around.

Don't be afraid to message me or something, if you feel he's having too much of an advantage in a certain situation.
Specific Crit Requests: N/A

[orz-woeisme.livejournal.com]

I've already left a comment about Alex in your personal HMD but I haven't received a reply yet. Just wondering if you saw :)

[cunning-carrier.livejournal.com]

Ah, right! I see it, now. I'll jump right on that.

Re: Alex Mercer

[daddyhost.livejournal.com]

I don't know the canon at all, but Alex comes across as quite a private/distrusting individual; so I wonder if I could ask why he sat and told the castle as a whole about his entire backstory and deepest secrets?

Apologies if it's canonically IC for him to splurge like that, it only seemed jarring because of how he's been acting prior to that.

Re: Alex Mercer

[cunning-carrier.livejournal.com]

I worried about the canonicity of it, after I posted it up there. I might have overshot my goal in trying to generate conversation.