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HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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| Ouran High School Host Club |

daddyhost
Time in Castle: 1 year, 3 months
Canon Point Kyouya's Reluctant Day Out
Loss: Beary
Notes: Again, I would like to say I am sorry for the confusion caused over the upcoming event, that was entirely my fault and I hope you'll accept my apology. As always, any ideas for the Host Club are also welcome here.

| Good Omens |

madetothwart
Time in Castle: 1 year, 1 month
Canon Point: After the book
Loss: Cannot wear suits
Notes: Anything at all is welcome!

| Trinity Blood |

derpish
Time in Castle: 9 months
Canon Point: Just before getting killed on the Mars Colony
Loss: Is now allergic to fish
Notes: Anything at all is welcome!

| My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic |

elementoflol
Time in Castle: 4 months
Canon Point: Just after Episode 21 (Over a Barrel)
Loss: All cupcakes she tries to bake will turn into rocks
Notes: I'm always conscious I might be being too annoying with her? Too abrasive? Are the songs too frequent or need changing up?

| NCIS |

bitenotbark
Time in Castle: 1 month
Canon Point: Series 7, Episode 4
Loss: Her Star of David necklace
Notes: Ziva is my newest and the one I'm least confident on, so ANYTHING at all is welcomed gratefully.

Edited 2011-07-16 18:18 (UTC)

Ena, your Pinkie Pie is spot on perfect! In cannon I feel like she's a very delicate mix... she is incredibly annoying, and is always doing weird off the wall stuff that makes us as an audience roll our eyes. However, there is something very endearing about it all the while, so even if you do feel annoyed you can't resent her for it because... well, it's Pinkie Pie! And I feel like playing her it would be really easy to either play her as super annoying, or super lovable... but you fuse it together so that she's just perfect asdgash, and I can always hear her voice in comments :)

AND I LOVE HER SONGS ASDGA

Ahh Mushroom, thank you! I feel that too about Pinkie, that she's both incredibly annoying and super adorable at the same time, so it's something I'm conscious of trying to balance.

ALL HER SONGS ARE FOR YOU, MUSHROOM, ALWAYS.

Didn't I flail at you recently?

One thing that impressed me about your Tamaki the shortest thread ever (whoops) is that you opted to stay ic instead of force it to be longer. I felt bad with Amelia's reaction, but it's really great that it worked like it did, because it's what those two characters would do, and it's awesome that you were willing to let it be that way. :)

Pinkie Pie is annoying in general. But your voice with her is spot on perfect, so I don't think you have to worry there. From what I've seen, you keep the balance well of being in character vs. just being obnoxious.

Your others I must stalk/interact with more! But between you and Crowley-mun, I've picked up Good Omens for a reread.

Ahah don't feel bad for her reaction, threads like that always make me laugh for how silly and ridiculous they are. I like having some threads that are short, because sometimes people do just meet and then walk away. I'd love to keep throwing them at one another =)

Thank you so much for your other comments, it means a lot to know you like Pinkie and Aziraphale (join usss in the GO casssst)

Whenever I read Pinkie Pie's songs I wonder if you secretly worked on the show or something, because seriously. That should be the hardest part of playing Pinkie Pie and you got it down girl.

Basically I have nothing to give other than Best Tamaki and Pinkie Pie I've seen in rp yet.

Ahhh you're so kind, thank you!!!

Clearly Pinkie and Adachi should meet and have mega CR? 8)

YESSSSSSS I've been meaning to throw myself more at the pony cast <333

I love tagging/stalking your characters. You always seem to put so much work into stuff, like the Host Club meetings or the crazy pony's songs.

One suggestion. Pinkie Pie needs to make friends with Natsuki while working in the coffee shop so she can run away and hide in a corner with Fenris or something.

Oh my, I feel that suggestion is an awesome suggestion. AND IT WILL HAPPEN!

<3

I once upon a time thought about apping Ziva myself, but I think you're handling her a billion times better than I ever could. I hear her when I read your posts and think you're doing good with her quirks like the idiom/proverb stuff. She's dedicated to her work as she should be.

I don't know anyone else but it's always a delight to see them around; I love reading everyone and they sound distinct. They're all active too, which is amazing to see in a big game like this.

I also am enjoying how you yourself are going around to almost everyone and leaving behind any crit you can! That shows how much you care, I think.

This...isn't really critical for a comment! But I had to say it. Keep it all up!

Ahhh thank you so much =D I just got some very helpful crit on my personal hmd for Ziva, so I'll be doing my best to incorporate that and get better.

I literally just finished leaving a comment for everyone, and I'm glad it's been appreciated <3

I really, really enjoyed that thread I did with Ziva at the end of the pirate plot, even though we didn't finish it. :) I don't watch much TV unless I'm visiting my parents but NCIS is one of the ones I usually watch while I'm over there (my mom loves it and not just for Mark Harmon) so I'm not fully knowledgeable about Ziva, but I know enough to think you're doing a great job with her. :) I know she's pretty abrupt and to the point and very hesitant to talk about her past so I thought you did that well.

The only thing I would have to say is that from what I've seen, she seems to also have a pretty teasing, cheeky streak too BUT--the thread we did was not exactly a good opportunity for you to showcase that so I'm sure you're doing good on that as well.

GOD I SUCK AT GIVING CRIT. Just wanted to say that I really liked that thread, thought your Ziva was great, and hope to thread again in the future. :)

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