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PARADISA MODS ([personal profile] paradisamods) wrote in [community profile] paradisaooc2011-07-16 08:11 pm
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HOW'S MY DRIVING?

HOW'S MY DRIVING?


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[identity profile] gottaknockhard.livejournal.com 2011-07-16 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Cowboy Bebop: Spike Spiegel - [livejournal.com profile] gottaknockhard
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://gottaknockhard.livejournal.com/679.html)
Loss: Memories of Julia.
Canon Point: Post-Series
Notes: I've been struggling lately. I'd really like to be around more and involved, so I'm hoping I can get past it. There's a lot I wanted to do still!;;
Specific Crit Requests: Anything would be welcome. I'm in a creative slump, so feedback is very appreciated.

[identity profile] daddyhost.livejournal.com 2011-07-16 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)
I still love your Spike very much, and if there's any plotting I can do to help you out of the slump then hit me up and I'm yours!

[identity profile] gottaknockhard.livejournal.com 2011-07-16 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, I'd really like that. :) You know I love playing with you whenever I get the chance ♥

[identity profile] thedicearecast.livejournal.com 2011-07-16 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I know our characters just started playing, but I want to help! The Bebop cast is just amazing, and I really want to get some cr with them.

[identity profile] gottaknockhard.livejournal.com 2011-07-16 10:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, thank you! I'd been meaning to tag Amelia for a while, actually. Bounty hunters should stick together. <:

[identity profile] thedicearecast.livejournal.com 2011-07-16 10:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, they should. :|b And so glad you did! I'm looking forward to what could develop.

[identity profile] wolfuncaged.livejournal.com 2011-07-16 11:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I absolutely ADORE the negative CR Spike and Crowley have, and the positive CR Spike and John have. You play him SO well, so echoing Ena, if there's anything you need to help you regain his voice, then hit me up and I'll be happy to help!

[identity profile] gottaknockhard.livejournal.com 2011-07-16 11:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Back at you!! I love CR with you forever. I'm up for everything any time.

And thank you! ;o; It's not so much his voice as plot situations that have made me feel a little stuck where I'm at. I need to push past it and hopefully bounce back.;;

[identity profile] wolfuncaged.livejournal.com 2011-07-16 11:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Welp, if you ever need help in that department, I'm always happy to brainstorm something up with you should you ever need it!

[identity profile] gottaknockhard.livejournal.com 2011-07-16 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you;; I just... might! I really would IM you all the time if I didn't restrain myself constantly to keep from being a bother. (You do so much!) But I'd be more than happy to when you feel up to it. :)

[identity profile] wolfuncaged.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
Awww bb, you are NEVER EVER a bother. You can IM me any time you like, I love chatting to you! I need to go to bed now, because I have to get up for work in the morning, but I'll be online tomorrow night, so feel free to nab me then!

[identity profile] gottaknockhard.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
I'll catch you sometime. c: Have a good night!

[identity profile] onlyanapple.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, I'm online now for the remainder of the night, should you need me, give me a poke and I'm yours :3