HOW'S MY DRIVING?

[paradisamods]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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Comments

[tomatoandbasil.livejournal.com]

Your Nanako is the damn cutest thing and from what I've seen of Maya, she is the perfect derp. I haven't seen Yukari around enough to comment, and I don't know Colette's canon, but you have the "young girl" aura about you done fine.

[lord-wizard.livejournal.com]

alksdhgioeha /hands over face

Avali. You. Thank you so much. <3 The feeling is SO mutual.

[end-0f-line.livejournal.com]

I HAVE TO SAY IT. I love Zeke. He makes me happy, and your portrayal of him makes me happy. <3 Seeing him around more often just gives me so many things to smile about, and I'm glad he manages to put up with my less than kind program.

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

I hope so too! I think he and Elektra might get along pretty well, Y/N? I'd be willing to give it a shot, at least. :D

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you like her! I need to have her tag Clu more, because that thread was so fun.

b'awww, Puddle. I'm really, really going to miss him. It means a lot that you liked him, though, and hopefully he won't be gone too incredibly long.

[lord-wizard.livejournal.com]

Critback for love.

Really, I can't say much that is useful because I have no idea about your canons really, which always makes me sad, because they are both SO AMAZING. I have never seen Tron, nor even seen a trailer in which the characters speak, so my entire conception of that canon is based on your (and your castmates) portrayal, and I'm really starting to fall in love with it. Seriously. And with CLU...I can hear his voice in my head whenever I read his posts...and this is rarely possible without knowing the canon, but with you I can. That thread with him having a hangover, btw. I lol'd. SO HARD.

You are awesome. /makes grabby hands at all your CR ever.

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

For what it's worth, it's really only repetitive if the char is brand new and asking all the standard questions. For someone like Alice, I don't think that'd be the case.

She might start with the standard questions, but it would be linked to all her observations and daydreams and insights. And, from your first few posts, you've definitely got a handle on that.

If she'd ask, let her ask! You've proven you're a good enough RPer to take the mundane and make it interesting. I have faith!

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

This entire mod team really is wonderful. You've done so much with this game.

I'm glad you'll get to enjoy it more, soon. :3

As for crit? How is Damian so freaking adorable? That shouldn't be possible. And I've really liked that Clark and Jilly have been talking a bit more. I haven't watched a ton of Smallville but, from what I have, he's spot on.

I don't really know much about Cass, either from canon or in game, but that's linked to the time issue, so I look forward to seeing her around more. And I definitely agree with the others who've commented. Drop if you need to, but I'd try other things first, especially if you still feel happy and confident in her voice. You might not need to let her go.

[tomatoandbasil.livejournal.com]

I hear everything your Kanaya says in the voice my head has for her as I do when I read the comic. Her and Alleyne make epic serious talk/garden buddies.

NOT HELPFUL but thought you should know you doin' it right

[end-0f-line.livejournal.com]

*gathers up all of your pups* I love you, and I love your characters. Brock is always right there in terms of personality on a level that just stuns me every time. Alleria is probably one of the few people in this place that Liadrin admires and adores aside from Koltira and Thassarian. You make me love her more and more and more.

I do love Hellboy, but I haven't managed to spot one of his posts yet. Life has kept me really busy lately, so I need to keep an eye out, because Hellboy has always been one of my faves! C: <3

[chaosphiliac.livejournal.com]

aaaa you know i'm willing to throw whoever at you to get involved. ♥ so if you want someone to get kidnapped or team up with her or w/e.

well bro. ;) come at me.

[end-0f-line.livejournal.com]

I hope not either. ;^; he is one of my favorites.

[end-0f-line.livejournal.com]

Parker and Vereesa. PARKER AND VEREESA. <333333333

You have them DOWN, girl, and I am not even biased when I say that. I love the budding CR between Vereesa and Liadrin, and I can't wait to see where it leads, what with Liadrin back on the demonic stuff again, and them both on talking terms...

I do need to find some way to tag Parker, too, in the future. She's wonderful, and my favorite character from Leverage, so I can't believe I haven't made this happen yet.

[end-0f-line.livejournal.com]

Rin and Tyki are-- always-- perfect and true to form. I stalk their threads and enjoy everything I read, and how well you've managed to get their voices down. Don't ever change <3333

Kanaya. Oh god, Kanaya. I. LOVE. HER. Just...so much love.

[end-0f-line.livejournal.com]

You're one of the few people who play characters I am 100% familiar with, and even more rare is the fact that your execution is flawless. I'm sad the Weighted Companion Cube is going, because she was adorable and her thread with Liadrin had me smiling so hard I thought I was going to fall over.

Congrats on the new job, and please keep being amazing. :3 <3

<333 forever

[end-0f-line.livejournal.com]

Words cannot describe how happy Tavros and Lance make me. I really wish I was more familiar with their canon, but all I can say is that even without my lack of knowledge, these characters are beautiful in your hands. You make me want to learn more, and you make me want to claw at you for all the CR ever.




ilu. <3

[cricketycricket.livejournal.com]

You have her voice down well enough, but ... because of that? I wish Rose were around more, she doesn't seem as engaged in Paradisa at large, the way she ought to be.

Also, that being said... if you don't want to seriously consider people's criticisms, why would you even post? You may not mean to, but you come across as having a very nonchalant attitude - like if we don't care for how you play Rose, we can pretty much stuff it.... especially since she seems to be around just enough to make activity.

[end-0f-line.livejournal.com]

I know so little of Homestuck that I wish I could say more, but Aradia is adorable and you have kind of just blown my mind with her. +_+ <3

Please please please keep posting so I can keep watching!

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OH NO NOW I AM SO UNSURE I mean thanks

[eat-me-beat-me.livejournal.com]

<3<3 Do I really need to put into words how much I love you and York?

[end-0f-line.livejournal.com]

Slinking in here to say that I will always love Tobias and Eris, and that I always adore the way you manage to get her creeper factor just right. I can always hear the character's voice through your posts, which is a huge, huge plus. <3

[end-0f-line.livejournal.com]

It's been great to see you adjust to this scene and start to really spread your wings. I always appreciate Kite's enthusiasm, and the fact that he actually managed to understand and relate to Clu's situation was not only touching, but really made me happy, as it showed how closely you paid attention to things.

I know it's not easy figuring new things out, but you have his character down and if you ever have any questions feel free to ask! <3

[grotesques.livejournal.com]

ah, thank you so much! that really, really means a lot to me since i really want to keep a balance between her friendliness and her creepiness. i can't thank you enough. ♥

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<333

[eat-me-beat-me.livejournal.com]