How's My Driving?

[paradisamods]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Comment with the names of the characters you play for feedback on your roleplaying. Other players will then reply to your comment telling you what they honestly think in a constructive manner. While both praise and critique is welcome, we'd like to remind you that this is a valuable tool for many of our members. We'd like to request that all comments remain constructive.

While the staff highly encourages everyone to participate, only comment if you are capable of giving and taking potentially harsh concrit in a mature, level-headed manner. Assume good faith at all times. Crit is meant to be resolved, not "won". Give mutual respect for each other's work and ideas. Aggressiveness creates unproductive stress and conflict. If you are emotionally compromised, you are not fit to captain the Starship Enterprise need to step back, take a break, and then return when you're ready.

Anonymous commenting is ENABLED, and sock journals are ALLOWED, though they must request access to the comm before commenting.

We have provided a form to post with, if you would like to use it. Mentioning things like canon points, permanent losses and recent major events in their lives in Paradisa may help give people a better idea of the character's mindset and current actions.

<b>Fandom Name Here:</b> Character Name - <user name=> <B>Link to HMD:</b> <a href="http://----">Individual HMD Post Here</a> (optional) <b>Loss:</b> <b>Canon Point:</b> <b>Notes:</b> <b>Specific Crit Requests:</b>

Alternatively, you may choose to post a link to your private HMD thread on the character's journal and take comments there instead, and we will freeze those comments. People will be expected to follow the link to the character's individual HMD to give crit there.


Linklist
* Giving and Receiving Good Concrit
* Operational Details: Critique, Communication, Courtesy, Consideration, Et Al.

Comments

[fearbringer]

Fandom Name Here: Character Name - fearbringer
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (but I'll take comments here too; no need to freeze the thread)
Loss: His ability to innately know people's worst fears
Canon Point: post-canon
Notes: I was MIA for pretty much all of last month, so sorry about that!
Specific Crit Requests: Nothing in particular

[teenagebadboy]

Emmerdale: Aaron Livesy - teenagebadboy
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here
Loss: The ability to use any tools relevant to his work as a mechanic
Canon Point: Kissing Ed Roberts
Notes: His recent temporary loss was getting stuck in the clinic for a week. The castle also reminded him about the accident Jackson had 4 years ago. He has been interested in working in the clinic with first aid and such.
Specific Crit Requests: Language. How's my spelling/grammar? Any tips on how to make his Yorkshire dialect more prominent in text?

N.B. I'm ESL