inafadingcrown: (Hard as di'monds)
Galadriel, Lady of Lothlórien ([personal profile] inafadingcrown) wrote in [community profile] paradisaooc 2012-09-22 08:05 pm (UTC)

Beth

Lord of the Rings: Galadriel - [personal profile] inafadingcrown
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here
Loss: Nenya, her Ring of Power
Canon Point: After the healing the newly resurrected Gandalf after his fight with the Balrog. This doesn’t appear “onscreen” so to give you an idea, Gandalf arrives in Lórien directly after the Fellowship leaves.
Notes: Not...much
Specific Crit Requests: Just the usual. Is she still sounding like herself after so long in the castle? Does the semi-informal tone I've adapted for her seem to mesh with the formal tone we hear in canon? That sort of thing.

A Game of Thrones: Catelyn Stark- [personal profile] ladywinter
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here
Loss: Memories of the events of her childhood at Riverrun
Canon Point: End of season 1
Notes: I'm well aware that I've been slow with her lately and not as active. It just takes a lot more emotional energy to get in her headspace than it does Galadriel's. So I just wanted to let all her CR know that I love you and thank you for putting up with me.
Specific Crit Requests: Just the standard. Does she still sound right? Is she the right mix of stand off-ish and polite?


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