MSPA: HOMESTUCK: Jane Crocker - cyan_maid Link to HMD:Individual HMD Post Here Loss: The ability to bake. Canon Point: Jane: Transportalize Notes: Jane's been in the castle for a little over three months now! She's fallen into a routine here and does not like the castle for its tricks, but she is still naturally curious about it and struggling to be more accepting of unbelievable things, which are abundant here. Specific Crit Requests: Am I doing anything wrong? Is she using enough oldish words? Just send the crit my way and I'll do my best to fix her up.
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Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here
Loss: The ability to bake.
Canon Point: Jane: Transportalize
Notes: Jane's been in the castle for a little over three months now! She's fallen into a routine here and does not like the castle for its tricks, but she is still naturally curious about it and struggling to be more accepting of unbelievable things, which are abundant here.
Specific Crit Requests: Am I doing anything wrong? Is she using enough oldish words? Just send the crit my way and I'll do my best to fix her up.