Harry Potter: James Potter - staggeringego Link to HMD:Individual HMD Post Here Loss: Ability to control his animagus form Canon Point: Beginning of his 6th year Notes: Nope! Specific Crit Requests: OOPS Editing because I thought of something. GUYS I'm obviously not British, and I'm trying not to overdo or under...do the way James talks. So if I'm messing up his dialogue/syntax horribly definitely let me know what I'm doing wrong and I'll try to fix that up fast!
Homestuck: John Egbert - dupable Link to HMD:Individual HMD Post Here Loss: Ability to say no when people offer him baked goods. Canon Point: FORMERLY In the middle of Act 5 part two, when making a giant wind drill. After the canon bump it'll be after his first year on (not so) party boat Notes: He's currently out of commission for a canon bump, and I'll be making some adjustments on how I rp him after he wakes up from his canon bump. Specific Crit Requests: Not really.
Ultimate Marvel Comics: Peter Parker - webbing Link to HMD:Individual HMD Post Here Loss: His spider sense Canon Point: Issue 124 Notes: He's my oldest kid, and unlike John I don't plan on canon bumping him to give him a fresh perspective (there's not much of his canon left to bump him to before... he gets the bump in it). I'm worried I'm getting stale with him him. Specific Crit Requests: So I guess for specific requests, any tips that people could give me about not letting Peter's voice get stale or repetitive would be great!
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Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here
Loss: Ability to control his animagus form
Canon Point: Beginning of his 6th year
Notes: Nope!
Specific Crit Requests: OOPS Editing because I thought of something. GUYS I'm obviously not British, and I'm trying not to overdo or under...do the way James talks. So if I'm messing up his dialogue/syntax horribly definitely let me know what I'm doing wrong and I'll try to fix that up fast!
Homestuck: John Egbert -
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here
Loss: Ability to say no when people offer him baked goods.
Canon Point: FORMERLY In the middle of Act 5 part two, when making a giant wind drill. After the canon bump it'll be after his first year on (not so) party boat
Notes: He's currently out of commission for a canon bump, and I'll be making some adjustments on how I rp him after he wakes up from his canon bump.
Specific Crit Requests: Not really.
Ultimate Marvel Comics: Peter Parker -
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here
Loss: His spider sense
Canon Point: Issue 124
Notes: He's my oldest kid, and unlike John I don't plan on canon bumping him to give him a fresh perspective (there's not much of his canon left to bump him to before... he gets the bump in it). I'm worried I'm getting stale with him him.
Specific Crit Requests: So I guess for specific requests, any tips that people could give me about not letting Peter's voice get stale or repetitive would be great!