Thank you for your crit, and I really hope this doesn't come off as an attack or anything like that. I would just like to say things to your points as a way to further my understanding and the like.
After reading your crit, I have decided to pull Rhyme out of the kidnapping- you're right. I guess I was so excited to have her be able to be in a plot that I jumped without thinking. So, I thank you for that, and I hope that I haven't messed things up too much with our CR and I'm sorry for all the stress I've given you.
As for Beat getting pushed in the game, I personally believe there's more reason than just her maturity- knowing that he could possibly get Erased, and that he had dreams that he had to fulfill, she pushed him out of the way so he could do just that.
As for the Noise aftermath, I think the reason why I threw her at Neku is because, at least in game, she has a realitivily hard time lying and she was hoping that by showing him that she is pretty okay (not really, really hurt but to some extent, yes she is hurt) and that he doesn't have to imagine how hurt she is or otherwise.
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After reading your crit, I have decided to pull Rhyme out of the kidnapping- you're right. I guess I was so excited to have her be able to be in a plot that I jumped without thinking. So, I thank you for that, and I hope that I haven't messed things up too much with our CR and I'm sorry for all the stress I've given you.
As for Beat getting pushed in the game, I personally believe there's more reason than just her maturity- knowing that he could possibly get Erased, and that he had dreams that he had to fulfill, she pushed him out of the way so he could do just that.
As for the Noise aftermath, I think the reason why I threw her at Neku is because, at least in game, she has a realitivily hard time lying and she was hoping that by showing him that she is pretty okay (not really, really hurt but to some extent, yes she is hurt) and that he doesn't have to imagine how hurt she is or otherwise.