Fandom Name Here: Alan Bradley - is0latedthinker Link to HMD:Individual HMD Post (http://is0latedthinker.livejournal.com/843.html) Loss: His pager Canon Point: After he gets 'Flynn's' (CLU'S) page from Flynn's Arcade Notes: Trying to come up with ways for him to interact more with Castle residents / even get out more! I'm thinking maybe a loss will help? Specific Crit Requests: I'm still a little worried about Alan's voice. Does he come off as too condescending or too nosy? Do my posts leave enough for you to respond to?
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Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post (http://is0latedthinker.livejournal.com/843.html)
Loss: His pager
Canon Point: After he gets 'Flynn's' (CLU'S) page from Flynn's Arcade
Notes: Trying to come up with ways for him to interact more with Castle residents / even get out more! I'm thinking maybe a loss will help?
Specific Crit Requests: I'm still a little worried about Alan's voice. Does he come off as too condescending or too nosy? Do my posts leave enough for you to respond to?
Anything and everything is appreciated!