http://deminuit.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] deminuit.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] paradisaooc 2011-07-16 06:54 pm (UTC)

laura;

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i'm quite comfortable with her overall, but i'm always open to suggestions or crit or anything.



i'm concerned that he's not enough of an asshole. i waver with his reactions sometimes. it's both me not wanting to step on anyone's toes, and wondering if it might be too much/not enough. i feel confident with him on most days, but at times i feel shaky. any suggestions or criticism are quite welcome.


i am still on hiatus, sadly, and am posting this from the library. apologies in advance, as i may not be able to reply to anything until monday. if you have any concerns or anything you wanna say to me (ever) please feel free to PM me or e-mail me♥

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