HEY GURL I was reading this over and there was one thing that stood out to me as a little bit of a concern from this side of the fence.
Right now, the heroes possess the knowledge that Riful has been experimenting with people (including residents) to figure out how to perma-kill them. Once people start learning she's up to something more and people begin going missing -- do you think having them start to vanish a month before the plot event goes down is wise?
From my perspective, it will be a MAJOR concern of the heroes if they think Riful might be responsible for the disappearances, because the natural conclusion would be that she might permanently kill them. This would urge them to speed up plans to go after her, and I can't see things staying in limbo until a month later (mid-July to mid-August?).
kidnappings/disappearances?
Right now, the heroes possess the knowledge that Riful has been experimenting with people (including residents) to figure out how to perma-kill them. Once people start learning she's up to something more and people begin going missing -- do you think having them start to vanish a month before the plot event goes down is wise?
From my perspective, it will be a MAJOR concern of the heroes if they think Riful might be responsible for the disappearances, because the natural conclusion would be that she might permanently kill them. This would urge them to speed up plans to go after her, and I can't see things staying in limbo until a month later (mid-July to mid-August?).
Your thoughts? D: