windsturms //Strike Witches - since 16 January 2009 - lost memories of biological family - comes from post-SW2 Episode 10, or during her appearance in "500overs in Africa" which...has no English translation so uh. I'm just using that to make the canon point clear. How am I doing with the whole "moving between castle and outpost" part? I have noticed in some threads that other players and/or characters sometimes don't know which location she is at. My reasoning for it is that the main comm doesn't need a halfthousand "/pops in" "/leaves" posts, but if that's not enough, any input would be very useful.
saikyou_saiaku //Mai HiME - since 20 March 2010 - lost ability to use blunt weapons - comes from episode 26, before the HiME reach the Star. My greatest concern when it comes to her is whether her tags come across as overly similar to Sakuya's, because their speech patterns and mannerisms are quite alike. (Shizuru does have an accent in canon, but there isn't a satisfactory way in which I can portray that in English.)
jack_maid //Touhou Project - since 4 February 2011 - lost memories of Hong Meiling - comes from post-Ending #3 for TH10.5. Have I been making her adjust too quickly to being in the castle? Since she's been in the game before, I may have rushed her development without noticing.
Other than what has been outlined in the above notes, any feedback on the above characters would make me very happy!
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- since 16 January 2009
- lost memories of biological family
- comes from post-SW2 Episode 10, or during her appearance in "500overs in Africa" which...has no English translation so uh. I'm just using that to make the canon point clear.
How am I doing with the whole "moving between castle and outpost" part? I have noticed in some threads that other players and/or characters sometimes don't know which location she is at. My reasoning for it is that the main comm doesn't need a halfthousand "/pops in" "/leaves" posts, but if that's not enough, any input would be very useful.
- since 20 March 2010
- lost ability to use blunt weapons
- comes from episode 26, before the HiME reach the Star.
My greatest concern when it comes to her is whether her tags come across as overly similar to Sakuya's, because their speech patterns and mannerisms are quite alike. (Shizuru does have an accent in canon, but there isn't a satisfactory way in which I can portray that in English.)
- since 4 February 2011
- lost memories of Hong Meiling
- comes from post-Ending #3 for TH10.5.
Have I been making her adjust too quickly to being in the castle? Since she's been in the game before, I may have rushed her development without noticing.
Other than what has been outlined in the above notes, any feedback on the above characters would make me very happy!