Series | Smallville Canon Point | 10x11 Loss | Memories of Chloe Sullivan (her cousin) HMD Post |Here, screened + anon available Use for ANY character :3 Time in Paradisa | 6 months Wiki Page |Here Character Relations Chart | Very in need of updating, but here Concerns | I would love feedback on the Isis plot (in terms of IC & OOC) I refrained from giving her a huge role in the Slenderman research b/c I want to be careful not to let her dominate the research scene, especially on topics she's not knowledgeable about. I'm hoping this didn't come off as her not getting very involved - I tried to strike a balance, but I'm not sure I succeeded this time. Also, how am I doing on maintaining CR with her? Lois has a wide CR net, and I want to make sure your character is getting the attention they think they deserve if they're close to her.
Canon | Star Wars Canon Point | End of The Empire Strikes Back Loss | Inconvenient bouts of honesty Time in Paradisa | 3 months Wiki Page |Here Character Relations Chart |Here Concerns | If Han's felt a little sparse, it's for 2 primary reasons: 1) I've still been backlogging with him all the way back to his 2nd post, keeping some threads going for a couple months even. 2) I've had a hard time figuring out what to do with him. I feel generally comfortable with his voice now (feel free to disagree if you don't feel it's IC!), but I have a difficult time figuring out what to have him do with his time here. :( I'm really trying to work at it, as I don't want to drop him, so hopefully building him more CR will help...?
Canon |X-Men films Canon Point | Directly after Phoenix throws him into a wall in X3 Loss | Memories of Rogue Time in Paradisa | Almost 2 weeks Wiki Page |Here Character Relations Chart |Here Concerns | Logan's a brand new voice for me, so more than anything, I'd appreciate feedback on his voice/whether his actions are IC/etc. It's a game largely based around conversations with others, and Logan's a man of few words, so I want to make sure I'm not going overboard to compensate. Also, feedback on canonmate interaction thus far would be great. They're from a different universe but I still want Logan's reactions to them to make sense. He's been focused lately on getting to know the X-kids and assess their situation: and he's not above making things messy on purpose in order to do so.
Arden's Chars
Canon Point | 10x11
Loss | Memories of Chloe Sullivan (her cousin)
HMD Post | Here, screened + anon available Use for ANY character :3
Time in Paradisa | 6 months
Wiki Page | Here
Character Relations Chart | Very in need of updating, but here
Concerns | I would love feedback on the Isis plot (in terms of IC & OOC) I refrained from giving her a huge role in the Slenderman research b/c I want to be careful not to let her dominate the research scene, especially on topics she's not knowledgeable about. I'm hoping this didn't come off as her not getting very involved - I tried to strike a balance, but I'm not sure I succeeded this time. Also, how am I doing on maintaining CR with her? Lois has a wide CR net, and I want to make sure your character is getting the attention they think they deserve if they're close to her.
Canon Point | End of The Empire Strikes Back
Loss | Inconvenient bouts of honesty
Time in Paradisa | 3 months
Wiki Page | Here
Character Relations Chart | Here
Concerns | If Han's felt a little sparse, it's for 2 primary reasons:
1) I've still been backlogging with him all the way back to his 2nd post, keeping some threads going for a couple months even.
2) I've had a hard time figuring out what to do with him.
I feel generally comfortable with his voice now (feel free to disagree if you don't feel it's IC!), but I have a difficult time figuring out what to have him do with his time here. :( I'm really trying to work at it, as I don't want to drop him, so hopefully building him more CR will help...?
Canon Point | Directly after Phoenix throws him into a wall in X3
Loss | Memories of Rogue
Time in Paradisa | Almost 2 weeks
Wiki Page | Here
Character Relations Chart | Here
Concerns | Logan's a brand new voice for me, so more than anything, I'd appreciate feedback on his voice/whether his actions are IC/etc. It's a game largely based around conversations with others, and Logan's a man of few words, so I want to make sure I'm not going overboard to compensate. Also, feedback on canonmate interaction thus far would be great. They're from a different universe but I still want Logan's reactions to them to make sense. He's been focused lately on getting to know the X-kids and assess their situation: and he's not above making things messy on purpose in order to do so.