http://custodismundi.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] custodismundi.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] paradisaooc 2011-03-12 07:45 pm (UTC)

Trinity Blood: Abel Nightroad - [livejournal.com profile] custodismundi
Link to HMD: on journal /LAZY BASTARD
Loss: Lilith's image
Canon Point: chapter 46, when Esther is falling from the helicopter onoes
Notes: Abel has... gone through a lot AAH. Recent months have been extremely hard on him, and I'm trying to find a rational way for him to work through it without expounding too much emo on the public at large. (Hence, most of his hermit-esque angsting is handwaved or takes place in closed logs/threads etc, and he's been continuing to behave normally, which is typical of him to do!). I'm hoping to fix some of this (get rid of the additional nanomachines, primarily, since I've been handwaving everything in relation to them anyway AAH) through a canon bump sometime soon! I think he'll be much happier for it and given some time away from Paradisa to separate himself from the recent-ness of the Slenderman fiasco and Cain's loss. Until then, he'll probably keep trying to keep his whipped puppy faces behind closed doors like... a fail idek flkjsdf and show a cheerful face. I AM SO WORRIED about the balance between his derp/srs, especially considering all the stress the environment has dumped on him lately. If you have any resolutions or advice, or any suggestions, please -- I'm totally all ears! /fears
Specific Crit Requests: As stated above, I'd love any feedback on the best way to handle reactions to the fallout of a general fail few months.

Hellsing: Walter C. Dornez - [livejournal.com profile] johnbulls
Link to HMD: on journal /STILL A LAZY BASTARD
Loss: Memories of the "bargain" made in 1944
Canon Point: during the fight with the Captain while Major rolls up in his zeppelin like a baws
Notes: Walter is... very quiet. He doesn't tag around posts much since he's such a secluded character -- and it doesn't help the past month had Abel heavily involved in plots where Walter was not! But I plan to get him out more. Any thoughts on how to get the butler socializing would be great! (I also want to note an apology on the slowness in tagging at times; SOMETIMES MY BRAIN JUST DOESN'T WANT TO SOUND FANCY AND INTELLIGENT LKJSF I am so sorry. I am working on it, I promise. /watches OVA's 4298098234 times)
Specific Crit Requests: The most important thing to me is that he comes across as a dignified British gent, and his voice clear, unique. If you think I'm faltering/failing or have any pointers to those ends, please shoot 'em at me!

P.S. -(Not including Guts here, as he's BRAND NEW, but you can hit up his HMD on his journal if you'd like!)

ETA: ALSO flksjdf if you have any... AMUSING IDEAS for how to KO Abel for his canon bump? I AM ALL OVER THAT. It must be amazing.

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