HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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[paradisamods]

Off-topic.

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[paradisamods]

Off-topic.

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[paradisamods]

Unproductive.

Always late to the party

[hesam-bb.livejournal.com]

Heroes: Hesam - hesam_bb
Loss: memory of his older sister
Canon Point: post the Heroes finale
Specific Crit Requests: Anything! I'm working with a character with very small canon to work with so I'd really appreciate anything and everything that can help me flesh him out in the best way possible for others.

[recordhistory.livejournal.com]

D.Gray-man: Lavi - recordhistory
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://recordhistory.livejournal.com/1738.html?mode=reply)
Loss: His photographic memory.
Canon Point: Post-chapter 168.
Notes: Arrived August 28th, 2008.
Specific Crit Requests: Anything.

[gottaknockhard.livejournal.com]

Totally understand that! I don't mind at all, I was just happy to see it wasn't due to me or because you were thinking about letting him go. He's so awesome, I'm still excited to see him here. :) :)

Re: Emily's People

[gottaknockhard.livejournal.com]

It's no problem! There'll always be more opportunities. I hope things get better for you soon! I've been really busy lately so I understand. X( /replies days later;;...

[gottaknockhard.livejournal.com]

Sorry for replying late!;; But I wanted to say that I'll definitely keep at it. I want to tag around more than I do, it's just tricky to find IC reasons to thread with everyone I want to. BUT there's always excuses to find! And once my work load calms down, I'll hopefully do a better job of it. :)

[gottaknockhard.livejournal.com]

I'm sorry for replying so late! I've had a crazy work week;;

I totally understand! I mostly just wanted to apologize for being so awkward and explain the failing. I loved the setup of the plot so I was kicking myself for not doing a better job. I definitely knew that it was a ton of work, and that's the major reason I didn't want to bother it with you at the time. I hope that we do get to do another big plot though, it was a lot of fun! I'll just be more assertive and clear things at the start before it gets really rolling next time.

I'll throw Spike more at Han too! I'm hoping to get more RP time soon and I'll make up for things.

AND ABSOLUTELY. I could have gushed more about your characters honestly, they're wonderful to read and always get a smile out of me. :)

Haven't been getting LJ replies. I think the infection has spread to those of us unaffected before.

[ares.livejournal.com]

Ares and Spike might actually get along. Possibly. Who knows.

But yeah, I'm definitely looking forward to it. >)

[stalkershiki.livejournal.com]

Legit. I can't believe I missed the entire Slenderman plot while I was on hiatus... it's insane.

[hesam-bb.livejournal.com]

I really liked being able to have Hesam and Chase interact, so thanks for that! I really would love to get Hesam a bit out there more so anytime you're stuck with Chase feel free to throw him at Hesam. The only thing I would say would be to watch Chase with his 'Australian' slang. I can't think of an example off the top of my head but I saw an instance where he said something that was more British than Australian. (In saying that I haven't seen House for a while so for all I know he says British phrases in the show in which case, ignore me!)

[nocushywill.livejournal.com]

I have been enjoying their interactions so far. Thanks so much for the CR! It's really great for Chase to have a buddy to chat with and I hope you don't mind backtagging cause I would love to finish that last couple of threads of theirs -- I owe you tags.

Australian slang - will definitely work on that and be more careful about it. Will look through the past few threads to spot for errors and will do more research/watch more Aussie stuff to make sure I can get better at it.

Thanks so much for your comment. I really appreciate it.

+ I have yet to watch Heroes for Hesam but having Chase interact with your boy makes me want to! So I will be doing that when I get the chance. <3

[hesam-bb.livejournal.com]

\o/ ♥

I can help you with any Australian stuff if you need it XD
I need someone to make sure my Americanisms are cool, lol.

[nocushywill.livejournal.com]

That would be awesome. <333

[mmm-paradise.livejournal.com]

woo sorry about the delay. YES, I would love to have CR with you! I'll try to shove Dave at one of your characters as soon as I can - do you have any preferences?

[hanfreakingsolo.livejournal.com]

UM ANYONE, but definitely Lois :3

[mmm-paradise.livejournal.com]

lois it is! ♥ i'll get to one of her posts as soon as i can!