HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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Comments

[tehoniongirl.livejournal.com]

Who is...suddenly not mysterious since the mods are CRAZY QUICK.

:D

[custodismundi.livejournal.com]

HUHU... well you already know that he's getting bumped soon and how. :3

I'm relieved you think it's all being handled okay, since you're immersed in canon <3 I'm probably just stressing myself out but blah sffshfg. BLAH I SAY. I am so looking forward to miss redhead who will go miles to keeping the dumb smile on his face :>

[custodismundi.livejournal.com]

AAH NO it's not like that fff ;; I love threading with Spike; he's some of my favorite CR ever! It's just been a sort of draining month oocly and thus being a derp is much easier than being a badass intelligent butler, huhu. But I'm hoping watching the OVA's again soon and getting into the flow of posting more will help. <33

[autophoenix.livejournal.com]

Ahhhh I really want CR with Spike so I will definitely ... be hurling my characters at him more now that I know you're interested in them. ;; Claire and Damon aren't exactly the best at dragging out conversations sometimes, either, but we will just have to smoosh them together until they learn how to carry a long convo however smalltalky.

And yay Damon excitement! I hope he lives up to expectations.

[haki.livejournal.com]

Oh, anon. ;; Like being unwelcoming or being mean on purpose isn't what I'm trying to get at or trying to do at all. Um, I don't know what else to say since I don't want to repeat myself from my other re:anon comments. ldskfj

But please don't confuse my character's attitude with mine. AHHHH, 'cause that's the last thing I want ldskfj. I get that I play a really stand-offish character like Zoro, but he's normally like that. It probably doesn't help at all that he's my only character left. dslkfjawoei

Like I said, it's really all right if you don't want to tag with me now or or ever or not. I guess it's my fault that I'll be missing out on more potential cr ldfkj. As for the character(s) part? Um, all I have left is one? And it's been like this for a while now. Have you been getting this sort of attitude from me before? Like when I had more chars? Please, by all means, hit me up on AIM! I haven't been in chat since late last year, nor have I been talking to anymore players out of, like, four?

Like, I'm extremely sorry if I hurt your feelings and I'd really like to apologize since I don't really speak to a lot of para muns on AIM to begin with. Eep.

[stalkershiki.livejournal.com]

S-Something happened with Maya?? Why do I always miss everything whenever I have to leave the internet? D:

But, um. You know I love your Maya. So. You're just all around awesome with her, and I'm sure you'll be able to play a depressed!Maya just fine as well~

[stalkershiki.livejournal.com]

I think your Hunny is fantastic! I haven't gotten to play with him much recently since I was all gone and stuff, but I think you do his voice very well~

Also, I love the little flower things you have at the sides of his speech. Not that it has all that much to do with how you write him, but... just thought I'd throw it out there. They're kind of awesome. XD

[stalkershiki.livejournal.com]

Well, you know I love you and your Joshua. He can go off on tangents a bit, but... that's his character. He's made to be confusing and strange. And... I can usually follow what he's saying relatively well. Sometimes a link or two couldn't hurt, but I think for the most part that you should just keep doing what you're doing. Because it's awesome. :D

[gizmobunny.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you! I'm so glad I decided to start doing the flowers!

[siebter.livejournal.com]

yeah, i'm glad that things will be going better with her soon <3

and yeah! like i told you (& you told them), nothing can really come from it, but it'll be fun to try and work that out!

[stalkershiki.livejournal.com]

Fff, oh, hon. You don't come off as a mean mun at all! At least, you don't seem at all like that to me~

And I think you're playing Rhyme just fine! I might suggest that you be a bit more cheerful with her, though? Also, sometimes you've portrayed her as very... stereotypically little sister-y, and while she is, you know, a little sister, she's also very capable, very on-point, and she knows how to get stuff done. But beyond that, you play her awesomely. Just sayin'.

[plonks.livejournal.com]

Ahhhh *^* Thank you. Even if you don't know his canon, just hearing that he has a strong voice is really awesome. AND I'M SO HAPPY TO HEAR HE COMES ACROSS THIS WAY!

ALSO this was something I was worried when first picking up Rinzler, but he's proven easier to rp than I thought! It's not easy to get into a lot of things with him, and I definitely couldn't have him as my ONLY character, but he's much easier than I was expecting him to be, and I'm so glad I ended up apping into the cast ♥ I need to be making a post with him sometime soonish too :3

[plonks.livejournal.com]

Eeee! Thank you so much! That's awesome to hear! I WILL TRY TO NOT LET YOU DOWN THEN :)

[stalkershiki.livejournal.com]

Oh boy. I don't know if I got the chance to say this last HMD, so... I love your Barney. Like, a lot. A lot. I'm starting to really get into HIMYM right now too, and... oh my god, your Barney makes me so happy on so many levels. Just so you know.

All I might suggest is that... you kind of drop threads occasionally, and I want to play with him more! Like, it's kind of hard to really play with him unless we're both on at the same time, and that's hard for me since I'm busy a lot... but beyond that, the way you play him is fantastic. :D

[stalkershiki.livejournal.com]

Dude. I love your Kasanoda. He's sweet and adorable and just. lskjflds. I love him. A lot.

As for whether he should get over Haruhi or not... well, it could really go either way. According to manga canon, he ends up being pretty much over her... not that he's, like. Totally over her, but he's not obsessing over her all the time. But... you could go either way with him. Whichever you like~

YOU ALL TOTALLY REMEMBER ME FROM ABOUT A MONTH AGO, RIGHT? 8D

[stalkershiki.livejournal.com]

The World Ends With You: Shiki Misaki - stalkershiki
Loss: Her real body.
Canon Point: After everything. Like, the entire game is over, and everything is hunky-dory... and then she came here.
Notes: I know that I was kind of absent for about three weeks and I only just came back, so if you have no idea who I am... I totally understand. But if you do and you remember me, I'd like to hear your opinion as to how I'm doing~
Specific Crit Requests: Nothing in particular- anything you have to say, I'm willing to listen to~

[wasbornforthis.livejournal.com]

House: Robert Chase - nocushywill
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://nocushywill.livejournal.com/717.html?mode=reply)
Loss: The memory of his mother.
Canon Point: End of S6.
Notes: He was in a coma for a three weeks and came back with a canon update from S3 to S6.
Specific Crit Requests: Anything at all!

Dark Angel: Ben/X5-493 - wasbornforthis
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://wasbornforthis.livejournal.com/674.html?mode=reply)
Loss: Any and all knowledge of the Blue Lady.
Canon Point: End of Episode #18 "Pollo Loco".
Notes: He has had time to adjust to being at Paradisa, so expect to see him venture out of his room more.
Specific Crit Requests: Anything at all!

Harry Potter: Harry Potter - imthechosenone
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://imthechosenone.livejournal.com/559.html?mode=reply)
Loss: The ability to speak Parseltongue, any and all knowledge of Number 12, Grimmauld Place.
Canon Point: End of Book 5.
Notes: Really, really want to build more CR for this one.
Specific Crit Requests: Anything at all!

Smallville: Lex Luthor - averybusyman
Link to HMD: Individual HMD Post Here (http://averybusyman.livejournal.com/552.html?mode=reply)
Loss: His "super immune system".
Canon Point: End of S7.
Notes: New and in a coma. Waking up soon.
Specific Crit Requests: Anything at all!

Personal Note: The last few months have been a bit crazy for me as I first went on a holiday, came back and had to deal with crazy times at work. RL has the ability to throw you off balance when you least expect it. But I am glad that things are better now. I am going to stick with the four boys I have and really work on developing CR for them by tagging with the many different characters in Paradisa, so I am really looking forward to that. Currently, my aim is to tag more posts instead of just creating a post to meet the AC requirements which I have had to do in the past couple of months thanks to real life sucking the fun out of me. I am very much aware of how much I've sucked in terms of tagging and developing CR but I would still love to hear your thoughts about anything at all as both +/- feedback will help me work on becoming a better RP'er.

[encryptedlock]

<3333 I will always backtag, yo!

ALSO HOLY SHIT YORK HAS A CANON FACE NOW AND IT'S...NOT TERRIBLY FAR OFF FROM MY PB

[hardonic.livejournal.com]

that's perfectly all right! I'm the kind of player that can backtag forever, but i completely understand losing steam for a character after so long. :Db it's all good!

and i will address the problem so hard, it will not even know what hit it

skljafdfdasdlkj I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT, i spent a half hour of my life on that shit aoifjeaewoj

[honorinflames.livejournal.com]

Aaaaa thank you! He's especially tough because he changes so much over the course of the series that I'm always worried that I'm overdoing or underdoing something. So glad you think that I'm doing alright and are enjoying him! xD

[honorinflames.livejournal.com]

I've tagged your Katara?? What journal? :o

Jeez, thank you so much for all of that! It's really great to hear, you have no idea. :')

[waterbends]

lmao it's me and.. soupbender. I'm kind of everywhere.

[honorinflames.livejournal.com]

fghjkfjk I did a little spittake there...

Wow. Thank you SO much! Goodness! I don't think I've ever met anyone who is completely familiar with all of my characters, so... a compliment like that is huge. <3

And... Ugh. It's killing me to have to drop the Cube. But, the good news is, that I'm hanging onto the hope of bringing it back someday, when I have a better handle on my life. It's good to know that it will be missed!

[honorinflames.livejournal.com]

/KEYSMASHES FOR A WHILE

...you have no idea how much I loved interacting with soupbender. I talked about her for days, wishing she'd come to para. D:

[waterbends]

OKAY, you have no idea how tempted I was -- your Zuko was such a freakin' joy to interact with, and it KILLS me that he's a lone canon warrior, but lmao I'm terrified that having the same character in three different games is a little selfish :| OR I WOULD JOIN IN A HEARBEAT.