http://scouring.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] scouring.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] paradisaooc 2010-06-22 05:42 am (UTC)

I was distracted by other stuff for awhile a;sdf ahaha, but really guys, I think this was my favorite plot in awhile. I loved the involvement, the amount of CR I got from it, everything that happened.

THE ONLY THING, I could possibly say about it is that I didn't think group three got to do enough :( I WASN'T IN GROUP THREE, so I can't speak up for them, but it would have been nice if they'd gotten more things going on with them throughout the trip as well.

THAT'S LIKE... the only crit I can think to offer, otherwise it was amazing!

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